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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 19, 2006 18:48:54 GMT -5
MoonNight stood still as a rock. He wasnt sure how to enter rogue clan camp without getting attacked.He wasent afraid he had Scourges dog claws with him. Before MoonNights mother had died she said that scourge had killed tigerstar with the dog claws 9 lives and all . He had come to a desicion he would just walk into the camp. Stalkers shadow a tecnic he had made up as he walk into rouge clan camp he wondered were the gauds were.
easy he meowed.
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Jul 20, 2006 15:15:17 GMT -5
The golden tom laid in the shelter of a low sloped tree when an unfamiliar scent hit his lungs. He gave a hiss and jumped to his paws, looking around excitedly for Shade. When he didn't see him he stalked toward the camp entrance quietly, having learned from the best. He drew in his breath and sat up, poking his head out and seeing the tom. His amber eyes were attracted to the teeth that hung around his neck for a moment before he flattened his ears with a nod. "New meat." [/size][/color]
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 20, 2006 18:09:18 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300][glow=black,2,300]MoonNight all of a suddenly stopped and looked at the the low sloped tree. He had heard the hiss of the tom cat but didnt give any sign to the tom he had. MoonNight turned to the bushes and gave the bushes were the tom hidding stood the most cold smile stilling the cat with fear deathly fear. MoonNight had done this many a time most to stupid to relize he knew were they were thinking it was just a coincedence intill it was to late. the smile only lasted a couple seceonds but seem to be hours. MoonNight had decided to just wait. This is going to be hilarius MoonNight thought as he laying he his knees collasped in pain and his belly burned and he couldnt even feel the area from right below his right shoulder to very close to his lower regins. As the hot blood matted his black fur with wet blood as he started to black out he yowl with amusment "I WILL KILL U BLOODRAGE U WILL DIE BY SCOURGES DOG CLAWS IN MY PAWS U WILL DIE U BLOODTHIRSTY BADGER I WILL GIVE U NO MERCY FOR THE FORBIDDIN SIN U DID!!! I WILL KILL U!!![/glow][/glow]
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Post by shadowkit on Jul 20, 2006 18:59:53 GMT -5
use You instead of U
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Post by [F]irekee on Jul 20, 2006 19:21:00 GMT -5
Darkclaw walked around camp, deep irritation getting the best of him. He tended to get angry when there wasn't anything for him to do. His head shot up at an unfamiliar scent, accompanied by the faint scent of stale blood. An intruder? Darkclaws flawed eyes lit up, he really wanted something to amuse him right now. He didn't want to fight the intruder to protect this clan, he's never protect anyone but himself. He just wanted something to express his irritation on. He eyed the intruder with his cold flawed eyes, and flexed his long claws on the earth beneath them. "What are you doing here?" he meowed, a dangerous tone andwhite-fanged snarl giving him the exact appearance he enjoyed allowing others to see; a sinister one. He lowered himself into a crouch, even if this cat wasn't an enemy, it would ake a considerable amount to disuade Darkclaw from attcking the newcomer.
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 20, 2006 19:44:47 GMT -5
occ: im not sure wat occ is but im using it first of all ill use wat ever lettering i want and another darkclaw ur kind of late and if u didnt read my last to post ive just black out and when i finished my first post now one was their and on judge me's post he didnt see any thing either so u might fix that and start payin attention before u go post happy thats all
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Post by [F]irekee on Jul 20, 2006 21:16:41 GMT -5
ooc: In all honesty, I couldn't really understand much of what you posted except that there was an intruder in rougclan camp... Dang, I finally get a decent post and turns out I missed the point... ooc means out of character btw
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 21, 2006 18:14:57 GMT -5
ooc:hello wil someone reply
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Jul 21, 2006 21:00:54 GMT -5
The tom stared at the tom with his big amber eyes. What was he raving about?! He gave a hiss and crouched low, claws digging into the dirt as he warned him to stay back with his body language. "Hey! Shut up!" He took a step forward then a step back, baring his teeth in confusion.
OOC: I will post when I'm good and ready. And Firekee! Great job, that's the best you've done that I've seen yet, you're really improving
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Post by rex. on Jul 22, 2006 0:12:40 GMT -5
ooc: [rant] demon, you will NOT go about using poor grammar. i am honestly about fed up with all these kids coming in here, not punctuation, not spelling in a way that is at all legible. LOOK UP AND READ YOUR POST BEFORE YOU SUBMIT! have courtesy for the other members who are going to read it. if you don't know how to spell, well then i would suggest clicking 'modify' above your post and clicking spell check. Its right there and handy. it is not that hard to spell 'you' either just two extra buttons.
and also, unless this is a specific thread for only certain people; you would mention that either in the title or in the first post (which it isn't) I see no reason why Kee-san shouldn't join the thread. (good post BTW, mate! *karma*) [/rant]
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 23, 2006 18:13:55 GMT -5
i never said he couldnt but the way he did his post didnt match up with mine of judge mes
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 23, 2006 18:19:26 GMT -5
occ: hey judge me um im kinda confused with ur last post, and if anyone didnt understand my actual post um i like blacked out, so im not really sure on what to post for that.
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 23, 2006 20:31:46 GMT -5
ooc: and if you guys wish to know my guy is know older than and middle aged apprentice and has 3 big scratches down his body below his right sholder to the inside of his thigh
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Post by rex. on Jul 23, 2006 23:52:14 GMT -5
OOc: ....anyway. first of all this 'judge me' is a girl. and second of all....even I couldn't tell he had blacked out...or even how it happened. its so illegible. i even went back to re check it and noticed some power playing. and thirdly they don't necessarily HAVE to match up perfectly, she didn't even mention Goldy's (or as you call her, 'judge me') Chara, so i don't see how it didn't match. enlighten me.
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Jul 24, 2006 11:51:15 GMT -5
ok i will when i made my first post i stated that no cats were to be seen so kesane couldnt have been walking around the camp and i meant the tom that judge me was rpg was a he and when he didnt see him either and when my cat blacked out seesane said what are u doing here how is my cat suppose to awnser that when he isnt consuince and i clearly explain that he had blacked out i said "As the hot blood matted his black fur with wet blood he started to black out"
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