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Post by GiomanchSgath on Sept 18, 2006 18:04:29 GMT -5
"Well, I can guarantee you, I'm a good fighter; very good. Have any of you got the gull to face a full grown male badger?" MoonNight said.
kash: punctuation and spelling
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Post by rex. on Sept 18, 2006 19:19:33 GMT -5
The queen raised a humored brow at the tom and meowed "Face it?Looks more like the badger got a better lick of you..." Pandapelt let out a low purr. "And for future reference, cockiness isn't tolerated long here"
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Sept 19, 2006 19:57:42 GMT -5
"I have faced dogs, badgers, foxes, and other creatures. And I have won," Darkheart snarled. He didn't exactly like this cat, but he didn't have to. As long as MoonNight took orders, Darkheart didn't care. "Are you obediant? Loyal? Will you listen to me and do what I say?"
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Sept 20, 2006 14:24:14 GMT -5
"Depends what you're telling me to do, but I fight anyone, anything and if needed I'll help others. Oh, and maybe you have faced a badger but I doubt at my age. And I heard something about apprentices. I suppose since I'm new I'm one," MoonNight said.
[red]Cindy Added: Caps, punctuation, and spelling[/red]
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Sept 20, 2006 21:29:24 GMT -5
"I'll need you to obay my every order. And not to say that you're better than me. I think that, just to spite you, I'll make you go by Moonpaw. But you won't get a mentor, unless some Warrior feels like it. And if I hear that you're being disobediant, I may kick you out. Understood?" Darkheart growled. There was nothing to make him be nice. If this cat wanted fair treatment, he would have to get a little more respectful.
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Sept 22, 2006 20:36:59 GMT -5
"[glow=red,2,300]I WILL NOT GO BY MOONPAW! MY MOTHER NAMED ME MOONNIGHT AND I CAN FIGHT AS WELL AS ANY OTHER CAT IN THIS CLAN! MAYBE BETTER WITH MY CLAWS DEMON OF BLOOD!"[/glow] MoonNight snarled
[red]Cindy: Much better! But I added quotes and punctuation.[/red]
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Sept 22, 2006 22:11:09 GMT -5
"Then you are not welcome here," said Darkheart placidly. "If you do not want to do as I tell you, you are better off as a loner. You will be Moonpaw, or not be a Rogue and all!" Darkheart tensed slightly, ready to order an attack. He knew that no cat could fight all of the Rogues at once. His green eyes were narrow, and his tail bristled ever so slightly at the impertanance of this idiot cat. "If you are so stupid as to disobay the leader of the Clan you want to join in front of all the Warriors of that Clan, you may not have the needed intelegance to be a Rogue!"
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Sept 30, 2006 12:09:35 GMT -5
ooc: nice thread guys. ;D ;D
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Sept 30, 2006 18:14:49 GMT -5
OOC: -grabs popcorn and shares with Gold as we both watch- dun dun dunnn
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Post by streamy on Oct 1, 2006 9:51:02 GMT -5
ooc:GOLDY!!!! Check our Lunarpelt and Leopardpaw post...been waiting 4 u.
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Oct 1, 2006 9:52:35 GMT -5
"Okay, then i'll leave! Later, fools," MoonNight laughed.
[red]Cindy: Punctuation; caps[/red]
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Oct 2, 2006 21:31:49 GMT -5
Darkheart's lip curled. "RogueClan needs warriors that obay," he snarled after the tom. "We won't miss you! Run, kittypet! The true test of strength is how well you can listen and take orders!"
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Oct 3, 2006 5:16:46 GMT -5
MoonNight just kept walking and said, "We shall see, but i don't see you worthy of my respect."
[red]Cindy: punctuation, and I fixed the shorthand[/red]
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Oct 3, 2006 20:53:00 GMT -5
"If you don't find a cat worthy of your respect, don't go joining their Clan!"
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Oct 4, 2006 16:36:23 GMT -5
"That's not why I joined. My reason was to save this clan," Moonlight said calmly then he said, "There will be blood spilled on this ground tonight," and then merged with the shadows and if any looked they would see his blood red eyes right out the doorway watching them.
[red]Cindy: Caps, Punctuation.[/red]
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