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Post by rex. on Aug 15, 2006 12:46:36 GMT -5
ooc:.... *shakes head* i am not going to reply until you fix up that post, i cant read it or make any sence of it whatso ever. try using puntuations ( . , "" ! ' ) fixing your spelling, and grammer.
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Aug 19, 2006 14:05:04 GMT -5
OCC:Hey i modifid the post
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Post by rex. on Aug 21, 2006 23:36:46 GMT -5
ooc: modify: spell check...please
shade jumped when the intruder stirred and he instrinctivly let his claws fly at him as he lept away with suprise
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Aug 22, 2006 19:53:17 GMT -5
MoonNight causully sidessteped the young toms claws and began to look at his wounds then suddenly his deadly blood red eyes focused on the golden tom said "Were is ur leader or who ever is in charge here" he sneered. "Oh and ull have to do better than that to hurt me shrimp" Then yowling with laugther.
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Post by rex. on Aug 22, 2006 21:11:39 GMT -5
Hey! protested Shade; who had lept away from Moonnight as he arose. The young tom was enraged that the intruder had insulted his best friend after they had fixed up his wounds. Shade was about to speak again when a yowl stole his words away from the other side of camp. in the enterence of the leader's den stood pandapelt with a very regal look on her aged face. The queen padded with an autoritive air toward the three cats, letting her suprisingly lean muscles (for her age) bulge as she strode across the clearing. "Ahh... so good to see you've decided to join the living...though i would have perferred you bakc on the ground bleeding to death, but we cant have all that we want now can we?" the Bobtail she-cat raised an eyebrow at the loner and then spoke again "Why have you come here?"
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Aug 23, 2006 17:41:35 GMT -5
MoonNight fear striking gaze sweep toward the female cat who had just spoken and he calmly said "to join of course" then looking at his wounds again totally forgetting the she-cat he started muttering about a stupid badger all the while flexing his huge muscles the muscle of a cat with the blood of a lynx
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Post by rex. on Aug 25, 2006 22:47:51 GMT -5
pandapelt narrowed her eyes, inspecting the tom; he hadnt made a very good first impression when he first entered...passing out upon entering... "if you can survive, you may live here"
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Sept 3, 2006 16:02:20 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]"very well when do we start i want to get fighting" all the while akwardly flexing the huge claws that fit well but the were to big to fit into his claw sheath. His huge muscles flexed blood cold eyes make all in his gaze look away and the kits freeze in fear.[/glow]
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Sept 3, 2006 16:52:50 GMT -5
OOC: powerplaying, Kash and I never said Gold and Shade froze in fear.
His face remained stoic, backing up with Shade when the tom rose. He curled up his upper lip, tail lashing angrily as Pandapelt approached them. His gaze remained pinned on the other apprentice, not believing what he was saying. Anger overcoming him he spat out. We don't 'start,' you want go fight so badly then wander on out and get your tail handed to you! Don't expect us to have your back.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Sept 4, 2006 16:05:27 GMT -5
Darkheart walked up to the lot of Rogues. "What in the name of RogueClan is going on here?" he hissed. He looked around coldly, and his eyes found MoonNight, and he said coldly, What are ou doing here? If you don't answer correctly my warriors and I will cause you more pain than you've ever experianced. Answer right, and we will either give you what you want, or just chase you out. Speak." Darkheart flicked his tail. Darkheart had his own fear-striking gaze, though at the moment chose to hold it back. Instead his green eyes seemed to see right into the soul.
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Post by GiomanchSgath on Sept 11, 2006 18:48:41 GMT -5
MoonNight turned his menacing gaze to the newcomer, stared him straight in the face and in a defiant voice MoonNight said "I wish to stay here in the clan."
kash: i added quotation marks, and a period, fixed your spelling, and took out an 'and.' For future reference, when you are listing multiple descriptions or items, 'and' would indicate the last thing being said. for example: 'The brush, comb, and gel were put in a bag,' Rather than 'The brush and comb and gel were put in a bag.'
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Post by rex. on Sept 13, 2006 21:44:09 GMT -5
ooc: again...PLEASE use punctuation
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Sept 15, 2006 16:50:51 GMT -5
OOC: Yes, please punctuate! If you don't know how, then please learn! At least use quatation marks.. Please re-post if you want anyone to usderstand! If you want, I can help you...
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Post by rex. on Sept 16, 2006 22:26:17 GMT -5
ooc: actually, i think ive had it with your inability to get down even the most simple of requests. youve caught me at a bad mood, and im going to do something i picked up from another site. im fixing your posts for you until you get it.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Sept 17, 2006 10:14:49 GMT -5
"You wish to stay in the Clan?" Darkheart asked mockingly. "I don't see why not. After all, if you don't turn out to be a good fighter, you'll probably end up dead. And that would be your problem."
OOC:I agree w/ you Kash.. I'll help you with the modifying thing.....
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