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Post by yellowfang on Jan 6, 2007 16:00:34 GMT -5
Chapter 1. The she-cat made her way over the hilly slopes that led to her camp. out side on a rock ledge she met a pair of peircing blue eyes. They belonged to her friend Ice. She greeted her friend with a nuzzle on the shoulder. The two sat there. They heard anouther wolf come up behind them. It was Skop. He greeted his friends with a nuzzle too. But his reaction to the she-cat was different than the one with Ice. He clearly loved her. Ice pushed the she-cat towrds him. She first resisted. Then she went with it. her and Skop went down through the hills and in to the Sage Patch. She rolled on to her back. Kar. Skop said to the she-cat. her dark green eyes melted into him. She clearly loved him too. Yes. the black she-cat answered her tom. He whispereed into her ear. I love you Kar. You are my rose, my Wild Summer Rose. Beautiful and free. Don't let any cat ever take you away from me. Kar was speachless. She licked the tom on his cheeek. they headed back to their clan, Darkclan. Kar went to her den and Skop went to his. Before they split though they followed tradsition. They breathed each other's breath. Now they where one.\ [shadow=blue,left,300] Chapter 2 [/shadow] A strange scent woke Kar from her sleep. It was a rose. She knew amidiatly it was from Skop. She smelled the delicate flower. it was in full bloom. It wasn't exactly sun up yet. She knew Skop, being Deputy would be out looking for a patrol. She exited ehr den. She saw two other wolves with Skop. She joined the patrol. The patrol was made up of Thunder, Bat, Honey, Kar, and Skop. They went to patrol the boarder they shared with Stormclan. bat,Thunder, and Skop renewed their scent markers. They scented that Stormclan had been on their territory. This made Skop tense. Honey, not knowing that he and kar were mates, rubbed up against him. This made kar tense. Skop didn'rt look like he hated Hiney beeing there. Kar felt very betayed. She dropped her gaze to the ground. She heard some one from the ball of Skop and Honey. This made her very sad. She ran. Skop tried to follow her, but the hold Honey had cat=st on ihim wouldn't let him. He hissed at her and she finally let him go. Out of shoke of course. He tried to f0ollow her, but he lost her scent. Kar stopped at a boarder between darkclan and Mudclan. She stooped at a strwan. Her dark green eyes filled with tears, She sobbed. How could I beleve a powerful, strong, clan deputy ever love me? she thoght. This disturbed her. She never wanted to see him again. She never wanted tyo go back to Darkclan again! She didn't know how she felt. Sad, mad, sick, but most of all hurt. She was sore from the heartbreak Skop had caused her. Now she heard him looking for her. She tensed.
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Post by yellowfang on Jan 6, 2007 19:40:04 GMT -5
Feel freeto comment
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Post by mooncloud on Jan 25, 2007 12:42:40 GMT -5
I LOVED IT PLEASE DO MORE!
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Post by yellowfang on Feb 24, 2007 15:39:45 GMT -5
[[glow=red,2,300]center] Chapter 3[/center][/glow][/color]
kar got to her feet. She was unable to see Skop. She would not benifit to see Honey either. She didn't n=know what to do. She got to her feet. She would run. Run away fron the clan, away from hurt betrayle. She loped away from it. Before she knew it she hit a Riverrogue's territory. The River was high. She heard Skop. She quickly spotted a log to cross the river. She ventured acrossed it. She could smell no rogue. When she reached half way acrossed the log she stopped. There was the rogue. Get out of here! he hissed at her. She tried to turn, but the water fall beneith the log had made it slick.Now the rogue was fighting her. She saw out of the brink of her eye Skop. Then the rogue trusted her off the log. Her body fell. Before it hit the cool river water it made an uneasy twist. Then it hit a rock. Her body was broken into two. Now the waves carried it under. Skop attack the rogue. he took Kar's vengence. Now he too was a murderer!
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Post by shâdowõlƒ on Mar 5, 2007 23:32:14 GMT -5
Ooo... what' going to happen next? 
Poor Kar. Split in two, just like her heart. 
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Post by yellowfang on Mar 10, 2007 14:26:50 GMT -5
[glow=lime,2,300] Chap 4 [/glow] Skop reached the sight where he had seen the rogue. he hissed at him. Their claws struck each other. In the end the rogue was dead. He returned to camp. they all looked at him. there was fresh kill in a pile. But after he saw Kar die we wouldn't eat. Honey came to him. He hissed. he walked to the leaders den. After telling Gothstar what happened Skop went away. He didn't know where his paws were taking him. Then he saw it. The last place he had been with Kar. The sagepatch. He found the spot he and kar were the night before. He sat there. It rained on him. His fur was soaked. mudstreaked. |
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 10, 2007 14:38:52 GMT -5
That's really good! More!  |
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Post by yellowfang on Mar 24, 2007 18:26:28 GMT -5
i have to think. I dont know what will happen next.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 25, 2007 19:29:05 GMT -5
Maybe he should... fall in love with another cat, but not want to be false to Kar...
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Post by yellowfang on Mar 29, 2007 15:56:35 GMT -5
[glow=skyblue,2,300] Chap 5 [/glow] Honey came down to sit by him in the rain. Skop, I'm sorry. I didn't ... I didn't know you and her were...I so sorry Skop. she said. I know you're sad, and you have a right to greive, but come on, suge, you've been out here since sun down. The moon is almost going to go away. Come back to camp with me Skop. It's warm there. she tried to convince him. He didn't even talk. She tried to use force, but he didn't move. After many futile attempts Honey left him by himself. Skop was glad she had left. Now he cried. Why? Why Kar? Then he saw a flash of cloud gray flash. Then he felt himself being taken down. Then all was black. |
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Post by yellowfang on Mar 29, 2007 15:57:36 GMT -5
maahahahahahahahahaha!
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Apr 13, 2007 22:52:07 GMT -5
*Cries* So sad!!
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Post by yellowfang on Apr 15, 2007 12:32:19 GMT -5
[glow=hot pink,2,300]Chap 6[/glow]
Skop awaken in a meadow. he didnt know where he was. He didnt notice anything around him. Then, when his eyes focused, he saw ten pairs of violet purple eyes staring at him. One with a mud colored muzzle stepped up to him. Warrior of Moonpack and one who is close to the one who is a Niight Hunter. Tell us.. Where is The night Hunter? he asked Skop. Skop thought. the last person to be a night hunter was taten, and he died decades before fighting with his clan.Taten is dead. There hasn't been a night Hunter for years. You are crazy. he said. The wolf spoke again. I am Crate. leader of Fireclan. You may have known her as. The goldenkarra of Night? Skop recignized kar's name. You mean Kar? he asked Crate knodded. Were you close to her? Where is she? Skop Started to weep. YES! I was very close to her. VERY. I loved her. But now she is... he broke off. the word dead seemed only a whisper. Crate looked suprized at Skop. Then you alone will help US. he hissed.
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