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Post by Azure on Dec 10, 2006 11:11:13 GMT -5
There were three of us but I was the only to survive. I remember close to my mother, I felt her warmth, and I heard her heartbeat. When I was old enough to walk and eat food the two-legs gave us, a two-leg kit cam and got me. I cried for Mother, but the girl held me tight and kept telling me I was a 'good girl.' I was happy in my new home but I missed Mother desperatly. One day when I was old enough to be on my on, the two-leg Man and Woman yelled at each other. The Woman grabbed Girl and left me with Man. As soon as they left in the metal monster, things turned bad...
ooc: what do you think?
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Dec 10, 2006 14:49:46 GMT -5
Ooo...enticing.
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Post by icefang on Dec 10, 2006 22:01:28 GMT -5
Really cool... it makes me want to read more ^^ (pretty much what Goldy said x.X)
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Post by Azure on Dec 11, 2006 18:51:13 GMT -5
thanks...my cat Spottedshadow who is in Shadowclan was an abused kittypet so one day i was bored and i decided to do her story....the sad thing is her story and mine are the same......anyway i'll write some more when I can or this weekend if possible.
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Post by Azure on Dec 22, 2006 11:58:00 GMT -5
After Girl and Woman left, my first instinct was to hide underneath the bed, because Man was angry. As soon as I went under the bed I heard the heavy, angry footsteps of Man coming closer. I felt something grab my tail and pull me out of the bed. I hissed and growled with rage and fear. I figured out it was Man and I started scratching his arms. He only got angrier and he threw me against the wall. I scrambled to hide underneath something, but I was hit on the back by something hard. I felt my back bleeding and ran right out of the kitty door that they put there for me to go outside. I scrambled up a tree and stayed there panting. I saw Man come outside looking for me and I darted toward the woods. There my fate would be undecided.
ooc: pretty much that is the end....there she lives in Shadowclan and has made friends. She only has scars on her back to remember her horrible past.....so what do you think?
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Post by Hatchey on Dec 22, 2006 11:59:45 GMT -5
coolios
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Post by snowfire on Dec 23, 2006 7:51:08 GMT -5
Poor Spotty...... I think the beginning was nicer than the second part.
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Dec 23, 2006 13:31:30 GMT -5
+Karma
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Post by Azure on Dec 27, 2006 13:54:00 GMT -5
thanks...like i said her story and mine are pretty much the same, but she got away......nvm about that though....
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Post by yellowfang on Jan 2, 2007 14:22:36 GMT -5
I love it!! *MORE* MORE* *MORE*
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Post by Tears{May}Fall on Jan 3, 2007 14:11:50 GMT -5
wow..tearspell has no idea of this...suppose the two should swap stories some time..^^...interesting past. tearspell has a sad story as well..
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Post by Azure on Jan 3, 2007 14:15:14 GMT -5
i old you she was a kittypet. should of been more spacefic huh?
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