My Very Depressing Poem

[icefang]

Here's my very depressing poem. If I feel roused, I'll do the cool things with bold and italic that I did on Word:

broken chords

out the open window the
songbird's melody shines through
pure innocent untainted
so different from inside

a dark cold house holds
a piano
a young girl plays
broken chords

she sings a haunting melody
sad and cold
heart wrenching
soul piercing
she trills

trying to be unfeeling
but her song radiates
more emotion than words can describe

the very tremors of high notes
and vibrations of lows
echo feeling
pitches of torrential emotion

fear pain suffrage
a human heart crying out
its starvation of human kindness
accompanied by

broken chords

[icefang]

Just makes you want to dance, doesn't it?

[Marly]

Actually, i liked it ^^ it sounded sweet to me...well, in away, the girl putting her heart and soul into the piano, i use to play, anyways, i bet my poem is just a tad more depressing xD...i can explain it too..as you'll get for sure part of it...but yeah,

Take this razor,
Sign my wrists
So all will know,
Who left me like this.
Summer fades,
your heart grows cold.
I hate you,
Now you've been told.
So take this razor,
Sign my wrists,
So all will know,
You left me like this.


Ok, so basically it's about my cutting problem, but like part of the reasoning of it. I met my dad's old best friend in the summer of 2002, He was really nice then...then as he got closer to me...around fall(summer fades), he started to molest me...so yeah, i hate his f**k**g guts....So i guess i'm kidna blaming it all on him, which probley that's not all of it...

[rex.]

props to both of you...
stormy{ i can definatly feel a rythm to yours. very meloncholy but still very nice

Marly{ i feel for you. this is a very expressive peice, and i must high five you for that.

i think i will put something of my own:

hurry up
speak up
give me some attention or i will fade,
just like an unattended garden will wilt;
but with love, will bloom

yeah it didnt really rhyme...its really just crap...

[coddle the infectionxxx]

Oh! Pick me!

Blood Kissed

Destitude
I may hate you
But Will you let go
I almost hate your
Attitude
I would die for you
go to hell
and die for you
But I would kill you
go to jail
just to kill you

Dirty rain
it taints
the sky like
you and your desolation
Why do you hate me
Did I hate you first?
Who would start this
Your words are sharp
just like that razor
that razor you let hug you
I was here
But why couldnt you forgive
I tried
I trusted
I hated
Forget it for me
Kill it for mee
Come back for me
Leesh
Why did you leave?
Heaven must have needed my freind
You have to forgive
Kill, run, cut, and slice
Never leave me
Never come back
You never listened
Why did you hate me?

[icefang]

awwwww..... very sad, very pretty! (This thread is just sunshine and daisies, isn't it?)

[coddle the infectionxxx]

I know right, Lmao.

[*Simply Seasle*]

No one cares if life is unfair

as long as it works for them.

A group of girls chatter

but when I walk by, they whisper.

The sun shines brightly

even though I'm never happy.

If I walk down the hall

others clear a path, of sadness

When others lose anything

I smile in their[glow=red,2,300]sorrow[/glow]

Is it wrong to hate the world?

[Marly]

wow, they should really create a board just for poetry, we're all pretty good xD i supose this board is basically for poetry too...i have soem other dark poems...but i don't feel like sharing them just yet