Seapaw's past

[*Simply Seasle*]

okay i know everycat wants to know more about Seapaw's past, so i'm posting a little bit of it here


"Mother why do we have to walk so far?"Gentlekit asked."Well my kit we have to walk far because i have to get to a city where there are cats that can teach you how to hunt" Flower meowed, her eyes soft as she looked at the silver kit bouncing beside her."Sis just stop complaining" Strongkit meowed,"we have no time for it." Gentlekit fell silent, ruefully.It seems like we've been walking forever, why don't we stop? When the cats passed a stream with reeds at the banks, Gentlekit seized her chance."Why don't we stop here, it has shelter and food"Gentlekit meowed. "Alright"Flower meowed."Can i go make the reeds into a den?"Gentlekit asked."Of course you can Gentlekit" Flower meowed.After Gentlekit had made a small den and eaten a strip of fish she curled up by her mother and brother.Gentlekit watch the stars until she fell asleep.
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Seapaw is Gentlekit, the story is told from her point of view

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This sounds really good!

[*Simply Seasle*]

When Gentlekit woke up that morning her mother seemed to have been so happy she could burst."my wonderful kits i saw a city, we can go there and live" as Flower said this her eyes lit up.Gentlekit stood up and shook her pelt, knowing that there would be a lot of walking.

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Gentlekit felt the cold stones on her tired feet and looked around the city.The cats that saw them spat and hissed at her.Gentlekit felt rage boiling in her, they should not spit at them they should be nice.But not everything is meant to be nice.When her mother had finally found a alleyway that no cats were in.They all curled up in a cardboard box.As Gentlekit looked at night sky she had a feeling that they had come to a place far worse than the place they had left behind.

i would have written more but i've got to go

[The Only Froggems YOU KNOW!]

yeah!

[*Simply Seasle*]

Gentlekit stood up and looked around.Her familiy was still asleep.Walking carefully so she wouldn't wake her mother and brother, Gentlekit stepped out of the alley.She noticed a old cat walking away from her.Gentlekit began to follow her(the old cat)until the older cat stopped in frount of a wood box, with red and green blankets over it."why did you follow me" the old cat rasped.Gentlekit quickly meowed "only because i was bored", putting the words in the wrong order in her haste.
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i don't feel like writing anymore today

[*Simply Seasle*]

"well at least you are curious" meowed the old she-cat "come into my den, my name is Leafpelt" Gentlekit bounded into the den and a strong smell of herbs hit her immadlitly "hi Leafpelt, my name is Gentlekit, why does your den smell like grass and leaves?" asked Gentlekit, while looking at Leafpelt. Leafpelt had thick tabby fur and bright green eyes, the only way you knew she was old was because of the wisdom in her eyes.Gentlekit looked around her den, piles of leaves and flowers and grass were everywhere."the reason my den smells like grass and leaves is because i'm a medicine cat" purring with amusement at Gentlekit, who had stuck her nose into a pile of marigolds.

[|g.O.l.d.Y|]

I can see your writing skills progressing as you go It's looking great! Please lemme read more?

~:Goldy:~

[*Simply Seasle*]

"what's a medicine cat?" meowed Gentlekit curiously. "it's a cat that heals other cats with herbs" meowed Leafpelt, looking at the kit. "that's what my mother and brother want me to be" meowed Gentlekit "will you teach me how to be a medicine cat please?" "alright but first you have to come back here tomarrow in the morning" looking slightly annoyed, but not at Gentlekit. "okay i'll be back tomarrow" meowed Gentlekit as she walked out of the bright den.she was just like me when i was her age, though not careful thought Leafpelt as she watched Gentlekit leave.

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"where have you been?" Flower demanded when Gentlekit came back. "i was just out for a little walk" Gentlekit meowed, knowing this would satisfy her mother. "well we're going out hunting, stay right here" ordered Flower, as she walked out of the alley.Strongkit thew a gloating glance at Gentlekit when he pasted her.Gentlekit settled down for what she knew to be a long wait.

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try using paragraphs
its confusing sometimes, otherwise.
good though so far

[|g.O.l.d.Y|]

Ya, that does get confusing, not so confusing seeing as you break it down in posts and it's not a big HUGE paragraph of words in one post, but still confusing. I'm just rambling now...

~:Goldy:~

[*Simply Seasle*]

Gentlekit walked back to Leafpelt's den, almost crying.i can hunt, just as well as Strongkit, why can't i go hunt with them? it isn't fair Gentlekit walked into Leafpelt's den and smelt the strange scent of herbs."hello Gentlekit, i'm glad you came, meet Stone" meowed Leafpelt, tipping her tail towards a gray cat beside her.Gentlekit looked up in shock, she hadn't noticed the large gray cat."why are you here?" asked Gentlekit "are you hurt?" "no i'm not" meowed Stone, his voice warm and calming "i'm here to teach you how to catch fish" Gentlekit looked at Leafpelt, surpised."i thought you might want to learn how to hunt, Stone owes me and he will teach you" meowed Leafpelt softly."yes i'd love to learn how to catch fish! do we start today?" meowed Gentlekit, her blue-green eyes sparkling."yes we start today, follow me" meowed Stone, purring at the happy kit, as he walked out of the Healer's den. Gentlekit followed him, her body tingling in excitement.

[*Simply Seasle*]

if nocat posts here, i'll just delete all of my posts..............i mean there's no point to writing a story nocat will read