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Post by jaystripe on Feb 21, 2009 12:37:19 GMT -5
It was our first time meeting i couldnt wait everytime i saw her pretty blue eyes my heart raced and i thought i might explode with happiness and no we decide to sneak out and meet on the border of thunderclan and shadowclan as i left threw the dirtplace tunnel happy no one saw me every step i took i got more excited when i reached where we were suppost to meat i was sad to not she her as i waited i sensed some one coming as she made her way threw the bushes she said told you i make it with the sparkle in her eye i was breathless and could only say hi as we just talked i grew more and more in love with her but in the back of my mind i knew it would never work as light approach i said we must get going as we parted ways i caught a mouse so it looked like i was hunting when i return every1 was about and i went to sleep but my mentor made me do battle traning and i was so tired that i completely messed up i knew it was beacause i didnt sleep yet the next night i found myself going towards her again but this time something would go completely wrong
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Post by jaystripe on Feb 21, 2009 12:42:39 GMT -5
now i had a nebby sister and when i left she must of followed me when she saw what i was doing she threten to tell my mentor since our parent had died and we were just found by the clans and raised by a very nice queen so after she confronte dme she said i cant do that we already have to prove ourselve enough not being clan born but she doesnt understand the love i feel for pinepaw is a feeling a wouldnt train for the world but i rember my ambtions to be the greatest warrior there is i still had them but they seem to be but in the back of my head againt my sister will i countinued visting pinepaw and i actual kept up with my tranning as was doing good at it still i struggled every day knowing we couldnt be together to be together we would have to leave the clans forever and i wasnt sure i was ready for that but soon that decsion would come and i would have to make it right away
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Post by jaystripe on Feb 21, 2009 12:47:59 GMT -5
what i hadnt know was that our leaders secretly knew what we were doing the day they confronted us i will never forget as long as i live it was just liek any of our meeting i left easily and i didnt think no one had noticed but during our talk blackstar jumped out of the bushes and i jumped back then firestar jumped out to and they gave us a decsion never see each other again or leave the clans forever now pinepaw said she would leave for my when she did that i almost cried but i knew when you love some1 u must make a sacrfice i knew she wouldnt b happy out side of the clans i walked up and told her this i love you but you know we wont b happy out side of the clans one day we will b in starclan which knows no borders i will count the secents till we meet again good bye pinepaw i then left here there i heard a yelp of sorrow and knew we were both in alot of trouble but i didthe right thing but i couldnt help feel there was void in me but what i didnt n
know was it wasnt over we would meet again
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Post by Swifttail on Feb 21, 2009 21:20:38 GMT -5
Do you not know how to punctuate or something? This is just a giant run-on sentence.
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Post by jaystripe on Feb 21, 2009 22:55:43 GMT -5
srry im just to lazy to.  |
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