deerpelt
New-Born
PEACE TO THE BUNNIES!!!!!!
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Post by deerpelt on Jan 30, 2009 22:49:33 GMT -5
NAME: Deerpelt GENDER: Tom CLAN:Wind POSITION:Warrior PELT: He has a pointy face with long legs and short sleek brown and white tabby fur. His tail is medium length. His ears are small, but he has big eyes. He has a pale pink nose with a few little brown sections. His tail is brown with a white tip. PERSONALITY: Deerpelt is shy but curious and is a bit mouse-brained. He is good with cats of his clan, but is very defensive otherwise. LIKES: Rabbits, and going on border patrols. DISLIKES: Bugs, and hates fighting in battles. HISTORY: He was born as a rogue, moved to river, and now wind. IC EXAMPLE: Deerpelt was hunting, when he saw a ThunderClan apprentice. It was a putrid smell, so he turned his face in disgust and murmered,"he smells like fish inards.'' He ran back to the warriors den yelling ''Mommy, Mommy, I'm hungry!!!!!'' CODE: 2009
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Post by ./*/_feather_\*\. on Jan 30, 2009 23:02:54 GMT -5
OKay...ummm...did you copy the official character application because this doesnt look like it. I also think you should umm....make your history alot longer. Im not a staff member but...you know....
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Jan 31, 2009 12:59:34 GMT -5
You don't actually need a history. Looks good, but next time it would be great if you could use the form we have, but this has everything except for his age. As soon as you add an age, it'll be fine.
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 31, 2009 19:30:49 GMT -5
OK... Deerpelt... I'll just tell her to check this... I made this with her... is that against the ruls?
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Feb 1, 2009 20:43:31 GMT -5
If you were just helping her out, that's fine. Warriors United is a good site for people to learn how to RP.
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Post by Swifttail on Feb 1, 2009 20:50:30 GMT -5
k good. just like me, she had no idea what to do.
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Post by robinwing on Feb 19, 2009 21:04:39 GMT -5
PEACE TO THE BUNNIES!!!!!!!!! Dont worry about Cecielia all you have to do is just go to her house more often! Anyway i like the PEACE TO THE BUNNIES thingy!!!!!
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