Post by Swifttail on Jan 25, 2009 20:52:35 GMT -5
Cindy said I was accepted, but I'm gonna add some stuff. Tell me if I did this right.
NAME: Swifttail
CLAN: WindClan
GENDER: She~cat
POSITION: Warrior
AGE: 31 moons
PELT: Swifttail is an orange tabby she~cat with blazing green eyes. She has a blaze of white on her face. Her legs are not to short, but not to long. Her head fits her body fine, not to big not to small. She is a bit thin, but is working on that. Her coat is short, smooth, and well groomed.
PERSONALITY: Is helpful, and kind to other cats. Hates rogues. Can get very feirce when defending territory! Also is a fantastic hunter.
BAD HABITS: When she is mad, she claws at the ground, or trees, or anything!
LIKES:Green~leaf
DISLIKES: Intruders! And leaf~bare.
HISTORY: Swifttail was born right outside the border of WindClan. Her mother was a heartless rogue, who left her ther to die in the middle of leaf~bare. A WindClan patrol found her just in time to save her from the snow. WindClan never usually took in strays, but it was a kit! Swifttail never knew of her history until recently. She had been treated fairly, and still is. No one but WindClan cats know about her past, and they intend to keep it that way. No other clan shall know! Swifttail's parents are unknown.
IN CHARACTER EXAMPLE: Swifttail slid out of the warriors den. It was dawn. The only cat in the clearing was Rockwhisker. As Swifttail selected a sparrow from the fresh~kill pile, Scartail walked out of the warriors den. ''Want to go hunting?'' Swifttail gulped down her sparrow and agreed.
CODE:2009
Ok..... is that right? I hope!
NAME: Swifttail
CLAN: WindClan
GENDER: She~cat
POSITION: Warrior
AGE: 31 moons
PELT: Swifttail is an orange tabby she~cat with blazing green eyes. She has a blaze of white on her face. Her legs are not to short, but not to long. Her head fits her body fine, not to big not to small. She is a bit thin, but is working on that. Her coat is short, smooth, and well groomed.
PERSONALITY: Is helpful, and kind to other cats. Hates rogues. Can get very feirce when defending territory! Also is a fantastic hunter.
BAD HABITS: When she is mad, she claws at the ground, or trees, or anything!
LIKES:Green~leaf
DISLIKES: Intruders! And leaf~bare.
HISTORY: Swifttail was born right outside the border of WindClan. Her mother was a heartless rogue, who left her ther to die in the middle of leaf~bare. A WindClan patrol found her just in time to save her from the snow. WindClan never usually took in strays, but it was a kit! Swifttail never knew of her history until recently. She had been treated fairly, and still is. No one but WindClan cats know about her past, and they intend to keep it that way. No other clan shall know! Swifttail's parents are unknown.
IN CHARACTER EXAMPLE: Swifttail slid out of the warriors den. It was dawn. The only cat in the clearing was Rockwhisker. As Swifttail selected a sparrow from the fresh~kill pile, Scartail walked out of the warriors den. ''Want to go hunting?'' Swifttail gulped down her sparrow and agreed.
CODE:2009
Ok..... is that right? I hope!