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Post by Swifttail on Jan 22, 2009 18:27:07 GMT -5
Name: Swifttail Clan: ThunderClan Position:Warrior Pelt: Swifttail is a orange tabby she~cat with blazing green eyes. She has a blaze of white on her face. Her legs are not to short, but not to long. Her head fits her body fine, not to big not to small. She is a bit thin, but is working on that. Her coat is short,smooth, and well groomed. Personality: Is helpful, and kind to other cats. Hates rogues. Can get very feirce when defending territory! Also is a fantastic hunter. Character Example Thing: Swifttail slid out of the warriors den. It was dawn. The only cat in the clearing was Rockwhisker. As Swifttail selected a sparrow from the fresh~kill pile, Scartail walked out of the warriors den. ''Would you like to go hunting?'' Swifttail gulped down her sparrow and agreed.
Is that it?
Code:2009
Can she be in WindClan? Or, do you want me to make a different bio? I can, if I need to.
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 22, 2009 18:33:10 GMT -5
Oh... Gender: she~cat
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Post by Icesky on Jan 22, 2009 19:33:07 GMT -5
i think you forgot the age but if i'm wrong than just ignore this post
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 23, 2009 17:27:28 GMT -5
Oh, right! Age: 30 moons
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Jan 23, 2009 17:37:15 GMT -5
There's a ban on ThunderClanners right now - I'm so sorry.
Also, here's a tip: If you look at your post, the first one, at the top right corner there's a little thingy that says "modify." If you click on that, you can change up your first post and you don't have to post again.
Can you maybe add a couple sentences to your peltage description? (Is her fur long or short? Is she big or small? Are her legs long or short? Is her face narrow or wide? Those are some examples of questions you could answer.)
There's a code that you need in the rules. CLICK HERE for a link to the rules.
Thanks. Other than that, this is great for a first bio!
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 23, 2009 18:02:43 GMT -5
Oh.... okay.
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 23, 2009 18:15:38 GMT -5
How is it now? Ok, I really hope?
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Jan 25, 2009 17:53:25 GMT -5
Accepted into WindClan!
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 25, 2009 19:33:09 GMT -5
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS CINDY!!!!!!!
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Post by robinwing on Feb 21, 2009 14:58:57 GMT -5
thats how you ended up in windclan
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Post by robinwing on Feb 21, 2009 14:59:52 GMT -5
I was always wondering how that happend!
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Post by Icesky on Feb 21, 2009 17:54:39 GMT -5
well, I'm glad shes in windclan cuz otherwise her and dovestream wouldn't be mates
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Post by Swifttail on Feb 21, 2009 21:13:45 GMT -5
Yeah.
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