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Skykit
Dec 30, 2008 20:25:23 GMT -5
Post by Icesky on Dec 30, 2008 20:25:23 GMT -5
Name-Skykit Clan-ThunderClan Position-kit Age-4 moons Gender-She-cat Peltage- Beautiful pure white slender she-cat.Has gorgeous hazel/amber eyes.Has dainty light gray paws. Picture- www.warrenphotographic.co.uk/photography/cats/02712.jpg Personality-mostly nice but sometimes when she gets teased(which happens a lot because she's so small)she can get frisky.Is always witty and loves making the other kits laugh. Popular with other kits but is still down-to-earth IC example- Skykit was startled awake from a nightmare when a fox was chasing her and winning.She was so relived when she woke up in the full guarded thunderclan nursery,she slowly got up hopefully not awaking her littermates and the kits around her.She padded out of the nursery looking for the warriors that were guarding the camp when one of the other warriors caught her eye-to-eye."what are you doing out here its not even dawn yet!" asked the warrior,Nighthawk "Well...well..I was just stretching my legs...",replied Skykit who was aware that was not entirely a lie. Codeword-mistletoe
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Skykit
Dec 30, 2008 21:40:46 GMT -5
Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Dec 30, 2008 21:40:46 GMT -5
Can you add a bit to the peltage description? Maybe just make everything nice, grammatically correct, sentences? Otherwise, good bio.
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Skykit
Dec 30, 2008 22:14:08 GMT -5
Post by Icesky on Dec 30, 2008 22:14:08 GMT -5
ok
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Skykit
Dec 30, 2008 22:21:13 GMT -5
Post by Icesky on Dec 30, 2008 22:21:13 GMT -5
a beautiful pure white shorthair she cat with dainty light gray paws, With gorgeous hazel eyes---------how's that?
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Skykit
Dec 31, 2008 0:29:12 GMT -5
Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Dec 31, 2008 0:29:12 GMT -5
Much better. Could you maybe add a sentence about her build? Is she long-legged, stocky, small, etc.?
And I just realized - I'm so sorry, but right now there's a ban on ThunderClan cats. We have a ton. Maybe you could switch the Clan? So sorry for the inconvenience.
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Skykit
Dec 31, 2008 4:50:29 GMT -5
Post by Icesky on Dec 31, 2008 4:50:29 GMT -5
ok... how about RiverClan?
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Skykit
Dec 31, 2008 4:52:27 GMT -5
Post by Icesky on Dec 31, 2008 4:52:27 GMT -5
Skykit is small built and usually very clumsy ;D
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Skykit
Dec 31, 2008 5:23:11 GMT -5
Post by rocktalon789 on Dec 31, 2008 5:23:11 GMT -5
HI
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Skykit
Jan 1, 2009 15:21:22 GMT -5
Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Jan 1, 2009 15:21:22 GMT -5
Here's something helpful - when you want to change something about a biography or any post, go to the top righthand corner of that post. If you click on the button that says "modify," it will let you add to the post, change sentences, etc.
Accepted.
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Skykit
Jan 1, 2009 20:32:51 GMT -5
Post by Icesky on Jan 1, 2009 20:32:51 GMT -5
thanks i just noticed the modify button heehee
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