Emberstar
Kit
Whoever said anything's possible clearly never tried slamming a revolving door.
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Post by Emberstar on Dec 27, 2008 17:08:37 GMT -5
name; Spiritsong
clan; RiverClan
position; Warrior
age; 18 moons
gender; she-cat
appearance; Spiritsong is a small silver tabby cat with sparkling emerald eyes. Her fur is long and silky, and since she is from RiverClan, almost waterproof. Her tail is long and plumy. She has a small build and is lithe and wiry. She has a small gash on her right flank from a battle, and she limps from breaking her paw when she was an apprentice.
picture; ourworld.compuserve.com/homepages/EdgarKirschner/images/TEKU.JPG
personality; Spiritsong is kind loving, and gentle. She is very mature for her age, and she understands most cats. She is devoted to the cat who loves her. She isn't a ball of energy. She loves kits and wants to have her own someday.
in character example; From a different site, different cat) Embersong(Emberstar) eyes glinted and her ears were pricked. She was sitting her silent vigil, for she had become a warrior that night. She saw many pairs of eyes glinting in the undergrowth. She sounded the alarm as what seemed like hundreds of cats swarming into the clearing. She and her Tribe rushed into battle. Her eyes glinted in anger as she leaped onto the back of the nearest enemy. He hissed in terror and agony as she shredded him. She rolled over and flung the cat into the rocks. But she realized too late that there were too many cats for them to fight off, and these cats were fighting to kill. Stonejumper, the leader of the Tribe, sounded the retreat just before an enemy slit his neck. She went and hid in a crevice in the rock. She and two others were the only survivors.
codeword; mistletoe
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Dec 28, 2008 13:41:10 GMT -5
can you lengthen the appearance by a few sentences, please? go into more detail :]
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Emberstar
Kit
Whoever said anything's possible clearly never tried slamming a revolving door.
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Post by Emberstar on Dec 28, 2008 16:38:33 GMT -5
Is that better? If not, could you tell me what I need to put?
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Dec 30, 2008 21:08:25 GMT -5
Looks great. Accepted.
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Emberstar
Kit
Whoever said anything's possible clearly never tried slamming a revolving door.
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Post by Emberstar on Dec 31, 2008 11:55:07 GMT -5
Awesome!
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