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Post by pantherfang on Jan 19, 2008 1:07:47 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow]Cheetahpelt
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow]Was from thunderclan but left after his leader allowed to take in Shadowclan (the old one)
[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow]was a warrior, but is now just a rouge
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow]19 moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow]male
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow]His coat is golden with blackish spots. He has a long tail that it spotted as well, and the tip is all black. His eyes are emerald green. His body is slender and gracefull, and is gently rippled with hunting and battle toned muscles.
[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]don't have one
[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow]He is very uptight and strict to whatever life style he chooses, thats why he left Thunderclan after they let in Shadowclan. He hates being challenged, but enjoys showing the challenger whose boss. While he can be pridefull and sardonic, if befriended, you can count on him to be there for you whenever called upon, and will be a very loyal friend.
[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow]Cheetahpelt streaked across the moor. His persuer was far behind him, barely any cat could keep up with his gracefull stride. "stupid idiot" he hissed in mockery. He halted to a stop and faced his enemy, ready to battle, as always....
[glow=green,2,300]Code:BLOOD[/glow]
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Jan 19, 2008 7:39:01 GMT -5
Please lengthen the peltage and personality....you can say his personality that everyone doesn't know. No need to lengthen the IC because i've seen a longer one of yours before. And i think we already have a cat named Cheetahpelt....oh and rogues don't have warrior names. His name would be something like Cheetah if he was a rogue.
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Jan 19, 2008 14:55:07 GMT -5
He can have a warrior name if he's a rogue. Remember, rogues are normally cats that disbanded from their clan and turned bad, or they're part of RogueClan. I mean, RogueClan's LEADER is Darkheart, a warrior name.
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Post by pantherfang on Jan 19, 2008 15:52:41 GMT -5
You mean he has to be part of the rougeclan in order to have the name right? So otherwise do i have to change the name? (just asking, not challenging lol)
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Jan 19, 2008 16:27:50 GMT -5
Sorry. =P I confuse rogues with loners. lol. You don't have to change the name. RogueClan is just a bunch of rogues that banded together; your cat can be a lone rogue that didn't join RogueClan. To be accepted, just lengthen what I said. xD
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Post by pantherfang on Jan 19, 2008 16:39:34 GMT -5
I'm so sorry, i still don't fully understand, lol^^" So do you want me to say loner? or just leave it as rouge?
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Jan 19, 2008 17:25:16 GMT -5
Leave it as rogue if you like. You don't have to make him in RogueClan though. He can be a cat that quit his Clan, but decided not to join RogueClan. Your cat doesn't have to be in RogueClan to be a rogue. Understand now? xD
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Post by pantherfang on Jan 19, 2008 17:31:32 GMT -5
Yeah, i do now, so sorry^^" lol ~_~ heh heh
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Jan 19, 2008 18:23:56 GMT -5
xD All you have to do is modify it now
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Post by pantherfang on Jan 19, 2008 18:33:57 GMT -5
I did already didn't i?
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Jan 20, 2008 9:04:58 GMT -5
It doesn't seem like it...the physical description is very short. It should be at least 4 sentences. Same with the personality.
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Post by pantherfang on Jan 20, 2008 15:11:24 GMT -5
oh, okay how about now ^^
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Jan 20, 2008 16:23:07 GMT -5
Good! Accepted!
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Post by pantherfang on Jan 20, 2008 16:49:10 GMT -5
Lol, YAY^^
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