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Rose
Mar 2, 2008 16:39:07 GMT -5
Post by pantherfang on Mar 2, 2008 16:39:07 GMT -5
Name: Rose Clan: None Position:Kittypet/loner Age:27(In moons) Gender:she-cat Peltage:Sleek, silvery-moony gray. Icy blue eyes. Picture: I'll get one Personality: She is kind for the most part unless sleepy or annoyed. She likes meeting new friends and tends to get a bit confused when groggy from sunbathing. Rose is very loyal to friends, and she doesn't like standing by when friends are in need. So Overall, Rose is a happy-go lucky kind of she-cat (unless you pull her tail!) IC:Rose sat in the warm sun up on her fence and washed herself. This was one of her favorite things to do during the day. Afterwards she gazed out at the other cats roaming about and looked curiously into other lawns. "Hmm." she pondered "I wonder what its like in the other cats' yards. Their mice can't be nearly as good as mine, but then again, most of them eat kittypet food. Thats what i like about my Twolegs, they are very linient." She uttered and clossed her eyes to bath some more....
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Rose
Mar 2, 2008 17:37:23 GMT -5
Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 2, 2008 17:37:23 GMT -5
Mostly good, but could you make your personality at least three full, good, lengthy sentences? And maybe tack on another sentence to your IC? Other than that, I can't wait to accept your bio.
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Rose
Mar 2, 2008 18:19:56 GMT -5
Post by pantherfang on Mar 2, 2008 18:19:56 GMT -5
Hows that^^
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Rose
Mar 2, 2008 18:40:23 GMT -5
Post by STREAMY ?! on Mar 2, 2008 18:40:23 GMT -5
Good! Accepted!
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Rose
Mar 3, 2008 19:17:33 GMT -5
Post by pantherfang on Mar 3, 2008 19:17:33 GMT -5
Yay^^
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