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Post by ./*/_feather_\*\. on Aug 18, 2008 19:42:45 GMT -5
Name: Emberclaw[used to be-Ember] Clan: Ghostshadow's RogueClan Position: Warrior Age: 28 moons Gender: Tom Peltage: Golden orange like fire. Green eyes and mysterious red claws. Looks strangely like his apprentice but darker and not as fluffy. HIs tail is unussually long and stripped.
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Personality: Emberclaw is very loyal to his Clan. He will challenge anyone in histerritory no matter who it is. He is a fierce fighter and the best in the clan. Although he takes action before thinking Sunburst thought he couldve made a great leader.
IC: Emberclaw narrowed his eyes. "Nightshade i think something is near..." The orange tom unsheathed his claws. "Relax Emberclaw everything is fine." The deputy mewed. After walking a few more paces a bush rustled. Instantly Emberclaw leaped into action. He had something in his mouth but it was not another cat but...a rabbit. "Nice catch...next time think first." Emberclaw looked away from the Deputy. His tail lashed in embarressment.
History- When Emberclaw was young he got kicked out of his two-leg home because he had hurt the new two-leg kit. He was so angry that one day he met Sunburst in the woods and attacked her out of no where. She pinned him to the ground then let him up. He asked her where she had learned her moves. She explained the clan and he joined.
Code: Blood
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 19, 2008 12:37:00 GMT -5
Could you make the peltage a tad longer?
And there's a three-cat limit for kitties in the same Clan, including loners. Perhaps you could make one of your cats a loner who occasionally helps out Ghostshadow?
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Post by ./*/_feather_\*\. on Aug 22, 2008 23:20:53 GMT -5
Oh really? Well that's embarresing. But i was going to have Phoenixpaw run away to Riverclan anyway so.....
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 23, 2008 13:17:52 GMT -5
kk, as long as you do that pretty soon - within a month for sure.
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