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Post by burntfoot on Aug 23, 2008 11:17:15 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow] Cinderkit [glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow] Thunderclan/Loner [glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow] Kit [glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow] 2 moons [glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow] tom [glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] all grey with blue eyes. He has darker grey stripes and also some white stripes on his back and around his face. he has a white sploch around his mouth. [glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow] imeleon.com/photo/78/sitting_grey_kitty.jpg[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow] This is the serious, and shy kit but is incredibly brave and adventurous. he can get easily distracted and is very curious, but he is very loyal. He is very confused because he never knew his mother. [glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow] Cinderkit bounded up to Burntfoot, his father. What happen to my mother, he asked innocently. After waiting for a while for an answer, he became distracted by a butterfly. Why does he never talk about her, Cinderkit wondered. [glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow] BLOOD
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 23, 2008 13:13:41 GMT -5
Can you please lengthen your peltage and personalities considerably?
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Post by burntfoot on Aug 25, 2008 9:30:41 GMT -5
modified
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 26, 2008 9:25:18 GMT -5
I'm sorry for the inconvenience - but could you add another sentence onto each? Three sentences is generally considered the shortest allowed.
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Post by burntfoot on Aug 26, 2008 12:06:12 GMT -5
done, again
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 28, 2008 11:47:24 GMT -5
Thanks! Accepted.
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Post by burntfoot on Aug 28, 2008 18:22:41 GMT -5
thank you!!
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