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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Aug 23, 2005 15:10:27 GMT -5
Ok, just a while yesterday I started on my new story's prologue. Its not finished but it is almost done. I'll post more when I write more. In the prologue the mother dies saving Arrow. So sad I know . Anyways, hope you like it! ;D
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Aug 23, 2005 15:10:55 GMT -5
Warriors: MoonlightPROLOGUE The night blanketed the forest with darkness. Not even the the moon was up in its usual place in the sky. Only the radiant stars and the flashing lights on the Thunderpath brought brightness. Nearby, three small silhouettes strided together upon the leaf-covered ground. A white cat took the front with two small cats behind her. "Mother, can't we stop? I feel as if my paws are going to fall off", moaned a little gray and white tom. The silver kit, who had been walking beside him, gave her brother's ear a lick. "I'm tired too", she said with a yawn. "I'm sorry. But we have to find shelter,dear. We just have to keep going", their mother meowed gently, her blue eyes clouded sadly. Over in the distance, they could see a winding gray path. All of a sudden a huge red creature came speeding down with a loud thundering sound. As it passed the cats it sent black wisps of smoke in the air. "What was that?!", exclaimed the tom, screwing up his face at the acrid fumes. "That was a monster, Dagger. We are now on the Thunderpath. We must be very careful when crossing", warned the white queen. Then she turned to her daughter. "Arrow, when I give you permission you must cross". Arrow nodded her head obediently but deep inside her, she dreaded that something would go wrong. "See you on the other side", she meowed to Dagger. He just stared at her, not saying a word. She realized they were thinking the same thing. "Now!", Arrow heard her mother call out. For a moment, Arrow looked across the wide road and then she shot forward. She relaxed a bit when she got half way but suddenly heard a yowl. "Arrow! Look out!". Arrow tilted her head to the side and looked with horror as an enormous monster was coming straight toward her. A white flash of fur came out of nowhere and knocked her into the reeds. Arrow felt her herself disappering. The last thing she heard was a shrill yowl and then faded away into nothingness. Deep in the forest, three cats huddled close together as they miserably looked down at a black scrap of fur beneath them. "Arcticpelt, is there anything you can do? Anything at all?", a flame colored she-cat meowed desperatly. A small white cat shook her head. "Ravenwing is to old. I did everything she has taught me but even that can't help her now. I'm sorry Flamestar", Articpelt replied as she looked down at the ground at her beloved mentor. Articpelt felt a nudge on her flank. She turned around and faced an enormous brown tom. "You did you best. Ravenwing would be proud of you", he murmured sypathetically. Articpelt gave him a look of gratitude. "Flamestar", a rusty voice croaked. The three cats gazed in surprise as the black cat in front of them, raised her head a bit. Flamestar stepped forward and licked the cat on the top of her head. "Shh. Save your strength, Ravenwing", she told her gently. Ravenwing let out a sigh. "No. It's time for me to join Starclan. Before I leave, there's something I have to tell you". Flamestar felt her heart breaking. She had known this cat since she was a small kit. It was heard to let her go. "Go on, Ravenwing", Flamestar replied. "Last night, Starclan sent me a dream", Ravenwing rasped. The others in the clearing were wide-eyed. It had been a long time since Starclan had spoken to her. "They told me that all the clans are in great danger. The elderly she-cat wheezed badly and then began to continue. "You musn't give up hope when all seems lost for Starclan will be with you always. The brightest of day and night will guide you in times of darkness". Suddenly, Ravenwing started to choke on her words and shortly after, her breathing slowed down. Moments later, all was still. The old she-cat was dead.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 23, 2005 15:14:04 GMT -5
That is to sad! You could enter it in my contest when you are done! lol.
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Post by rex. on Aug 23, 2005 15:14:38 GMT -5
:-o thats--thats so sad! yet very good! :-)
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Aug 23, 2005 15:17:45 GMT -5
Thanks! ;D I am thinking of entering it in the contest but I'm going to make this story VERY long. It'd take a long time
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 23, 2005 15:18:51 GMT -5
Cool!! I think I'll like it a lot!!
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Aug 23, 2005 15:20:05 GMT -5
*purrs* ;D
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Post by icefang on Aug 30, 2005 17:51:13 GMT -5
Wow... talk about a cliffhanger!!! May StarClan walk with you, Firestorm
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Aug 30, 2005 18:47:08 GMT -5
Thanks!!! ;D
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Jan 7, 2006 11:55:00 GMT -5
The prologue is finally finished. I'm going to post Chapter 1 soon. I already wrote in my composition book
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Post by brokenstar on Jan 7, 2006 12:54:54 GMT -5
GREAT!!!
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Jan 7, 2006 12:56:34 GMT -5
Why thank you!
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Post by brokenstar on Jan 7, 2006 12:57:01 GMT -5
Your welcome! ^^
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Jan 11, 2006 16:09:35 GMT -5
who's the brightest of day and night?(i really liked the start of your story though)
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Jan 11, 2006 20:54:13 GMT -5
lol. Ohhhh you'll find out soon enough ;D
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