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Post by Mousefire on Sept 6, 2008 22:04:11 GMT -5
ooc: okay whitey.....im so sorry!!! first you get tonsilitis, thats bad enough with out correcting us constantly!!! i hope you get better soon.....
Jumpingkit heard Shadowpaws voice faintly through her thoughts, and managed painstakingly to remove her attention from the spectacle. She listened to what he said, turning to Ebonysnarl curiously. She flicked her tail happily, although slightly dissapointed at having to give up the sunset, waiting for his response.
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Post by snowstorm on Sept 7, 2008 14:39:43 GMT -5
Shadowpaw watched the eager kit and laughed, then smiled at Ebonysnarl.
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Post by rex. on Oct 1, 2008 23:37:59 GMT -5
ooc: I'm sorry, I failed to see the relevance between whitey's tonsils and the lack of inspiring posts here.
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Post by Mousefire on Oct 2, 2008 20:17:56 GMT -5
ooc: what happened to diamond???!!!!
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Oct 3, 2008 9:43:39 GMT -5
Ebonysnarl smiled back at the smaller cat. unsure of what to do next.
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Post by Mousefire on Oct 3, 2008 20:06:50 GMT -5
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Oct 3, 2008 21:12:04 GMT -5
OOC: Hey guys? Try for a three-line minimum on your posts. That means AT LEAST THREE LINES. It makes the thread more fun and interesting, and makes you a ton better at RPing.
If you need some help, here are some parts of any good post:
Descriptions - you need to describe all of what is surrounding your character. Is it a dark night? Is there a lot of wind? And add how those things effect your character's actions and mood. You also want to describe your character's looks over and over - that makes it easier for the other person to refer to your character's physical features. Emotions - you need a pretty detailed description of what's going through your character's head. What do they think of what's going on? Why are they acting the way they are? Actions - this is one of the easiest parts of a post, but if you are descriptive it can also be nice and long and juicy. This is important! Without this, the other RPers have nothing to work with. Dialog - last but not least, dialog is key in any interaction. It is important not to rely on it as the only way of showing how your character is feeling, so long, entirely-dialog posts are just as bad as one-liners.
I'd also like to point out that by not doing this, you are insulting all of the admin team. Whitey asked you all to lengthen your posts and for one or two posts you did as she asked - and now you're back to one-liners again. It's as if you don't take us seriously - do we need to start using punishments such as locking threads or even banning members?
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Post by jaystripe on Feb 21, 2009 17:09:35 GMT -5
jaystripe walks out of the den he looks as if he just woke up he walks over to the group and says "hi guys whats up " saying it kinda of akward since thesse aren't cats he usual doesnt talk to but he been feeling kinda of lonely so he thought he try to make new friends so far it hadnt been going so well
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Post by Mousefire on Mar 6, 2009 20:48:06 GMT -5
ooc: cindy and whitey, i am really really sorry, I promise it wont happen again in this thread Jumpingkit's head snapped around as she heard another cat come up behind her. "H-hi," she greeted shyly, shrinking back in spite of herself. Shadowpaw she wasn't afraid of, but with all these other new cats.............. She glanced behind herself towards ThunderClan territory, hoping noone noticed. "Who are you?" she asked, turning back, a spark of curiosity in her eyes. She shook her fur briefly, loving the way her tabby fur shinned in the light, before flicking an ear back in the new cat's direction. Her mom would be looking for her after a while........ she needed to find a way to politly escape without anyone knowing. She didn't let that show though, as she waited for his answer.
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