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Post by Mousefire on Aug 24, 2008 0:25:58 GMT -5
What prey? she asked, not understanding what he was saying. Meanwhile the butterfly had made it's escape, now flying through the clouds.
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Post by snowstorm on Aug 24, 2008 0:28:48 GMT -5
"Well your butterfly, but as I can see it seems to have fled." he meowed looking after it.
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 24, 2008 0:32:41 GMT -5
"Oh, right" she said, staring at the sky.
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Post by snowstorm on Aug 24, 2008 0:34:54 GMT -5
"It looks realy nice doesnt it. The sunset," he said.
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 24, 2008 0:36:09 GMT -5
ooc: last post project in morning sorry
"Yes.... replied" Jumpingkit dreamily.
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Aug 25, 2008 10:10:56 GMT -5
Ebonysnarl slunk out from behind a rock and looked at the two cats. His red eyes burning.
"What are you doing?" asked the demon cat.
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 25, 2008 16:11:47 GMT -5
ooc: i think you need to update your siggie, diamondleaf
Jumpingkit let out a squeak in surprise. "Hi Ebonysnarl," she mewed quietly, shrinking back. "We were just looking at the sunset......"
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Aug 25, 2008 16:24:51 GMT -5
OOC// yep, will do. thank you.
Ebonysnarl looked up at the setting sun and his own eyes turned amber in the rays and his coat gold and black from the light.
"A beautiful light show," he growled quietly. He looked back at Jumpingkit "You're scared of me, aren't you?" he asked, with a slight sad note to his voice. "Why?"
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 25, 2008 16:37:10 GMT -5
"No, you don't!" she yowled! trying to comfort him. "You just startled us, that's all!" She turned back at the sunset when he mentioned it, loving it as it shone down on her pelt, turning it a molten gold and displaying the forrest with more color than ever, especially with all the colored leaves. She sighed as the rays snuck through her pelt, warming her inside and out. "Isn't it beautiful?" she whispered silently.
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Aug 26, 2008 15:28:14 GMT -5
"indeed it is. I'm glad this Clan have kits as young as you that can enjoy such beuaty. You'll grow up to be a great warrior." replied the red eyed cat.
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 26, 2008 16:47:29 GMT -5
"Maybe," she replied, staring into the sun's depth as she swished her tail. She wasn't quite sure yet whether she wanted to be a warrior or a medicine cat. She watched as the sun sunk lower to the ground, turning the sky red. She sighed dreamily,wrapping her tail around a nearby tiger lily's stem. They both seemed like fun.
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Aug 27, 2008 16:25:56 GMT -5
Ebonysnarl watched both the sunset and the other cat. thinkign his own thoughts.
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 28, 2008 20:46:39 GMT -5
ooc: im going to wait for snowstorm
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Post by snowstorm on Sept 6, 2008 13:10:17 GMT -5
ooc: sorry !!!
ic: Shadowpaw watched Ebonysnarl closely. He was nothing to be afraid of. "How are you today Ebonysnarl?" he asked watchingJumpingkit
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Post by .Whitey. on Sept 6, 2008 17:50:12 GMT -5
OOC;Guys, Come on! This is twice I've has to say; I've already had a go at you lot for "bored open 2 all" before! Keep your sentences longer than two lines like you were before! I know I may seem like a big meanie but you should be showing the new members how to rp since you are senior members. Make sure you keep your sentences over three and not like your recent post Snowstorm, make it long and- yes, I know it's mega hard to always do it but can't you guys at least do it once in a while? I'm sure you guys understand- and I'm sorry for the inconvenience. Remember- More than three sentences long- three is the minimum, but make them into paragraphs not just:
Now don't you guys think if you'd wanted to you could've made that into one long post? I'm not just meaning your post Snowstorm I'm just using it as an example. C'mon guys I know you can do it right!
eg: Please read, but don't copy- "ic: Shadowpaw watched Ebonypaw closely, he flicked his tail in greetings but to be polite he added, "How are you today Ebonysnarl?" He watched Jumpingkit out of the corner of his eye but still, he waited for the toms response. Shadowpaw had nothing to be afraid of and he certaintly wasn't afraid of the tom in front of him."
See? I'm not saying do it ALL the time just make sure you do it frequently
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