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Post by brokenstar on Dec 28, 2005 19:19:41 GMT -5
CHAPTER 1-JENOVA
Jenova,a great Ex-ShadowClan cat that was banished from the forest of her treacheous powers.She was the meaning of death.The huge black cat was looking for a mate.She was old,she needed kits to continue her treachory.She had heard a evil leader,former leader of ShadowClan,Brokenstar lived around here.Brokenstar was sleeping under the Great Sycamore in ThunderClan Territory.He noticed Jenova,and greeted her."Hello."he said coldly.Jenova only nodded,but they became good friends.Jenova gave birth to three kits.Windkit,Firekit and Icekit.Jenova was a Ancient you see,otherwise known as a Cretes.Cretes are Ancient cats that have many,many, strenghs.For one,they have no weaknesses.They don`t have emocions.They only fight.But these kits were diffrent.They had emocions.They had weaknesses.And sometimes they don`t like to fight.This was strange for their treachoures parents......
CHAPTER 2-LOST
Two months later......The kits were able to walk.Soon,they could see,and play.Jenova died after she gave birth.Now their father,Brokenstar,did not know how to take care of kits.Soon,he abandoned them.The kits slowly starved.They ate dead prey.They were slowly dieding...
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Post by brokenstar on Dec 28, 2005 19:23:12 GMT -5
Feedback please.
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 29, 2005 8:51:19 GMT -5
Nice! Very nice. Kind of mysterious
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Post by brokenstar on Dec 29, 2005 11:56:37 GMT -5
Chapter 2 is short.Their Kits for StarClan`s sake!Thanks,Dessie.^^
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Post by icefang on Dec 29, 2005 18:05:54 GMT -5
I LIKE IT!
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Post by ::Fawn:: on Jan 6, 2006 19:13:08 GMT -5
me to!
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Post by brokenstar on Jan 7, 2006 12:41:14 GMT -5
Thanks!!!
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Jan 7, 2006 15:12:36 GMT -5
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Post by ::Fawn:: on Jan 7, 2006 20:20:16 GMT -5
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