lets have a story contest!

[Midnightstorm]

OK so lets have a story contest here are the rules!

1. it has to be about your cat you can make up cats too.
2.It has to be five sentences long.
3.no dogs.
4.has to have a battel
5. HAVE FUN! ;D

[Midnightstorm]

Goldkit walked around the forest but as a loner you you have to be careful of the clan cats. lets hunt he said to himself. Pouncing around the forest he had already caught a thrush and a mouse he was a very good hunter. but just then something caught his he truned around to see a rough. he had herd of then they were not very friendly. so he droped his prey to fight . he jumped a the rough and clawed his back but the rouh fliped him off and took the prey and ran off but being a kit he didn't that much energy so he went to find some place to crash. THE END

[silvercloud]

Silvercloud was bored, yet again. "Good entertainment sure is hard to find these days." He thought to himself. He decided to take a walk along the river, the sound of it moving swiftly downstream always calmed him; but that was not to be the case today. The first thing he noticed was an unfamiliar scent, the second was Riverclan fear scent. Silvercloud rushed over to where the smell was coming from, and stopped in front of some reeds. He was hoping he would be able to pick up the situation by the conversation- he was right. "Where's your precious Starclods now, huh Clankitties? Are they so pathetic they can't even help two of their deluded followers? Well? Speak Dumbkit!"
"I'm not Dumbkit!" Squeaked a tiny voice. "I'm Duskkit!"
"Duskkit!" Silvercloud knew that name- in-fact, Duskkit was one of his best friends in Riverclan. "You're gonna be Deadkit if you talk-back to me like that again!" He'd heard enough, "Leave him alone." Mewed Silvercloud, stepping out of the reeds, "It's bad enough they have to look at your ugly mug, and if you don't get off our territory right now, it's about to get even uglier." The rouge hissed, "Tch, two kits and a crazed cat with dreams of grandeur, I'm soooo scared."
"You should be!" Silvercloud hissed back, unsheathing his claws. With that, they lunged at each other, a snarling mass of teeth and fur. The rouge was bigger that him, and had him pinned down, but a few hard back leg swipes, and the weight was gone, now yowling in pain from the deep gashes along his underbelly. Silvercloud took this opportunity to bite down hard on the other cat's tail, and sent the intruder fleeing into the reeds. Letting out a deep sigh, he turned to the kits, "Why are you so far away from the camp, you know the rules! You could've both been killed." Duskkit shuffled his paws in the dirt, "We're real sorry Silvercloud- we only wanted some fun." His sister, Egretkit bowed her head, "We promise, we won't do it again." Silvercloud sighed, and bent down to lick each one on the head, "Don't worry about it, let's just get back to camp." He started to head for the direction of the camp, the kits sticking close behind. A stinging pain throbbed on his shoulder, and he bent his head to lick the scratch; then Silvercloud stopped, and mewed to the kits- "By the way. If anyone asks, say it was a bramble thicket." The kits nodded their heads vigorously.


I know this is a lot more than five sentences (a lot more), but I like it.

[Swifttailfirestar10123]

''Swiftstar!'' Swiftstar looked up. Scartail was calling him. He had been staring at the ground, near the LightningClan border. Thinking...about FireClan, his clan. He had been drawn out of his thoughts by his deputy calling his name. ''What is it, Scartail?!?'' he called. ''DeerClan! In camp.'' She answered breathlessly. Swiftstar was on his feet now. ''What!'' he yelped. ''Hurry!'' Scartail ran up the hill. When they got to camp, there was blood everywhere. Swiftstar and Scartail leapt into battle. To his right, Swiftstar saw Rockwhisker deliver a front paw blow to a LightningClan warrior. To his left Robinwing and Deerpelt partner fought. Swiftstar raked his claws down an apprentice's side. Then he realized... LightningClan was reatreating.Soon, they were gone. FireClan had won! Swiftstar ran over to Scartail. ''Why in the name of StarClan did they attack!?!?'' Scartail shrugged her shoulders. ''To make us suffer, I guess.'' Swiftstar looked over his clan. No one had serious wounds. ''We made it!'' he yelped. ''FireClan has won!!''

I didn't bother with paragraphs...
Swfttail/firestar10123

[Swifttail]

It says i'm a guest there... my thing just logged out for me.

[Swifttail]

I love the one about Silvercloud! Great job!!!!!

[Swifttail]

Swiftstar was mad. Really mad. After the battle with LightningClan, everything went back to normal. No trouble on LightningClan border, nor RainClan. BreezeClan just as hostile as ever. Then around came the gathering. Swiftstar mentioned the battle. Big mistake. That look in Treestar's eyes... pure fury. Why look at him like that!?!? LightningClan had started the battle!!! It wasn't Swiftstar's fault!! They had won. He couldn't help the fact his warriors were good fighters. Swiftstar hadn't gone for another walk in the forest in fear that he would miss the first part of another battle. Sitting outside his den, he clawed the ground under his paws, imagining it was Treestar's flank. He didn't know why that stupid look had made him so mad. It was just a look, right? Wait a sec... what was that noise? Cats fighting!!! Swiftstar leaped off the rock of his den. He didn't stop to explain to any cat where he was going. He didn't stop running until he got to the LightningClan border. There before him, in a tangled mass of fur and claws, was Robinwing, Scartail, and two LightningClan warriors, Orangetail and Rockfur. ''Stop!'' He screeched. Nothing. Not the slightest pause. So Swiftstar did the only thing he could do. He raked his claws down each LightningCan warriors' side. They stopped, yowling in pain. '' Fox dung!'' Rockfur spat. Scartail hissed. '' Quit it!'' Swiftstar meowed.'' This is no way for warriors to act.'' He glared at the LightningClan warriors. '' Go back to your camp.Off our territory.'' he commanded. They left, hissing. '' Don't think Treestar won't here about this!'' Orangetail yowled over her shoulder. Robinwing hissed. ''Enough.'' Swiftstar commanded. '' Back to camp.'' The two warriors didn't argue. Swftstar watched them leave. Then he turned back to where the LifgtningClan warriors left. He knew that FireClan hadn't heard the last of them.

[Swifttail]

on my first story, it says DeerClan in camp. I meant LightningClan. There are also some typos in each story.

[Mousefire]

be prepared for lots of scrolling

Mousefire entered the camp hollow, blackness surrounding the moons piercing the night. The camp was deserted. Perfect. His scent was completely disguised as a rouge, and he carried an orange tuff of fur in his maw. Making sure not to make a sound, he quietly padded into the leaders den, casting a faint shadow on the sleeping fur in front of him. He flashed his claws, and the leader jerked awake, his eyes buldging as he gasped. Blood filled the cave floor as Mousefire watched grimly, his leader's lives fading away one by one. Kashstar looked up at his deputy, his eyes pleading in shock and betrayal as his last life left him. Mousefire carefully placed the fur tuff on the neck wound, before hastily but thoroughly washing his paws and padding out of the dead leaders den. He picked up his mouse at the edge of camp, placed it in the fresh kill pile, before padding into the warrior's den and falling asleep.
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[Swifttail]

WHAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?? Mousefire!!!!!!!!!

[Mousefire]

What?! Its just a story! And besides, I'm not finished yet!!!

[Swifttail]

Oh, fox-dung! That's just not right!