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Post by angelkit on Nov 24, 2007 11:23:37 GMT -5
Three kits comes running back to the camp as cats see a flash a fire red, snowy white, and midnight black as the kits goes to the Nursery looks for there mother. "I can't believe we're finally back, Moonkit" mewed the orange-red kit that was about 6 moons old to the black kit that was also 6 moons old. "I know what you mean Firekit. and what about you Angelkit" mewed the black kit. "yea me too"mewed the white kit that was 6 moons old as well.
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Post by &&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò] on Nov 24, 2007 21:35:19 GMT -5
Dreamcloud looked up from her nest in the MedicineCats Den. She had heard kits playing outside. Since she knew that Qialsongs kits were too young to be doing so, and she was one of the only Queens who were missing there kits, she thought that maybe it was them. She slowly and painfully got up, limping over to the entrance of the MedicineCats Den. Her shoulder had been getting worse and she realized what might happen to her and the Kits she carried with her everywhere. As the winter sun shone through the clouds that morning, she noticed three kits run towards the Nursury. She knew who. Angelkit! Firekit! Moonkit! she yowled for her kits. She winced in pain as the Adder Bite began to react again.
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Post by angelkit on Nov 24, 2007 21:42:27 GMT -5
All three kits stop and look around fanicly to there mother's yowl. You notices how much they grown, they were no longer 2 moons old but now are 6 moon old as they see you and goes running towards you. "Mama!" mewed Firekit who did look like fire when he runs. "Mommy!" mewed Moonkit as her innocent eyes shined of wisedom of healing. "Mommy! Mommy!" mewed Angelkit who look like a swift white angel with sparkling saphire eyes that now have brighten alot the last time you have seen them.
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Post by &&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò] on Nov 24, 2007 21:46:46 GMT -5
She purred happily as she greeted her Kits. Where have you three been? Midnightfang wont like the fact of you all disappearing so suddenly, leaving camp without permission and such. She meowed in an angry yet comforting voice.
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Post by angelkit on Nov 24, 2007 21:51:59 GMT -5
Angelkit started to wail as she stay really close to you while Moonkit cuddles up to you close as well. "The twolegged kidnapped us when Angelkit got stuck in a hole," mewed Firekit,"and they named us with really bad names called "Muffin", "Rusty", and "Snowball" yuck"
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Nov 25, 2007 11:41:19 GMT -5
OOC-sorry to interrupt, but Angelkit, you don't RP in second person. Like, no 'you's and 'I's. Instead of writing 'Angelkit started to wail as she stay really close to you while Moonkit cuddles up to you close as well', write 'Angelkit started to wail as she stayed really close to her mother while Moonkit cuddled up close to Dreamcloud as well.' You also write in past tense, not present, when you're RPing. It's easier for everyone if you follow these rules. Thanks! P.S. an old member wrote an RPing guide...I can PM you the link if you like.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Nov 25, 2007 12:07:20 GMT -5
Cinderheart's eyes blinked open, feeling quite awake for the first time in a while. She hadn't gotten any sleep since ShadowClan moved into the camp. She looked around her den, trying to tell what had woken her from her deep slumber. She wasn't mad; her body was well rested and didn't need any more time to heal from sleepless nights. She stretched and, as she did so, spotted the three kits who had been missing for moons. They didn't look like newborns anymore, more around the age of apprentices. "Angelkit, Firekit, Moonkit!" she purred, "Where have you been?" She had been very worried but just couldn't bring herself to be angry. The soft voice and the purr behind her words showed her feelings.
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Post by angelkit on Nov 25, 2007 12:16:33 GMT -5
OOC: --;;;
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Post by &&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò] on Nov 25, 2007 12:49:49 GMT -5
[/b] She meowed gently to the darker gray she-cat. As she spoke, she flicked her silver - white and black stripped tail at the three. Dreamcloud couldn't stop purring at her missing Kits. When she saw Cinderheart come out of the MedicineCat's Den, she was sure that she was going to tell her to get more rest due to her shoulder injury. But the she-cat didn't, she only exclaimed in joy for the Kits.[/ul][/size]
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Post by angelkit on Nov 25, 2007 12:53:57 GMT -5
Angelkit looks at the new cats that pop out of nowhere as Moonkit and Firekit does the same as they stay close to Dreamcloud.
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Post by &&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò] on Nov 26, 2007 20:11:40 GMT -5
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Post by angelkit on Nov 27, 2007 20:17:49 GMT -5
OOC: Dang......that's not cool --; now I have to do school work basicly if I have to make the sentence longer or more then one. --;; That is really good at all...
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