Pet Ghost
Apprentice
S.O.K. Save our kittens!
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Greg
Jan 18, 2008 18:17:38 GMT -5
Post by Pet Ghost on Jan 18, 2008 18:17:38 GMT -5
Name: Greg (lulz)
Clan: Loner
Position: Loner again
Age:13 Moons
Gender:Tom
Peltage: Dark brown tom with white markings on his face. Picture: Too lazy
Personality: Hostile to all strangers, he prefers to live alone. He used to be a kittypet, until he wandered into the forest when he was 5 moons old, he was helped by another loner. After that he taught himself to hunt and now roams the forest.
IC: Greg stood in the foliage, waiting for the mouse to look away. At last, it turned back to it's seed, he slowly crept up silent as, well, a mouse, the mouse looked, and he pounced. The mouse's crys were silenced by a killing blow to the neck, he was hungry, he hadn't eaten in what seemed like moons, the cold had driven all the prey back to it's burrows. He started to ravonously eat the mouse, it seemed that no prey had ever tasted so delicious.
Code: BLOOD
ALSO: srry i abandoned my other char, stuff came up in school, and i got a Wii... etc. I'll try to be more active this time.
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Greg
Jan 18, 2008 20:38:20 GMT -5
Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Jan 18, 2008 20:38:20 GMT -5
Your peltage needs to be much more descriptive and so does your personality. In your personality all you really did was give some history and tell us he's hostile.
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