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Post by //Diamonte . x on Nov 3, 2007 15:54:07 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow] Thistleclaw
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow] ThunderClan
[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow] Warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow] 21 moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow] Tom
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] A pale gold color with white paws and black ear tips and tufts. His pelt when he's running in the sun flows like liquid gold, its not particlarly, long or short but seems to mold with his body giving him an impressive look. On his paws he has slight feather around his front paws.
[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow] N/A
[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow] Thistleclaw puts on a tough face but is really a sweet, generous and caring cat deep down. He went through a lot of teasing about his coat when his was a kit, that's why he had the name Thistle because his coat stuck up in thistle like spikes and would never stay flat. For this reason, he's always extremely guarded and doesn't make friends that easily, meaning he never let's others give him a chance and never gives himself a chance.
[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow] Thistleclaw leapt from a rock and landed on a kittypet that had strayed into ThunderClans Territory. He hissed violently as the other cats claws scared a light furrow in his fur. He lifted a paw, claws extended and dealt the other cat a blow to the face that sent it skidding across the forest floor, then it got up and ran. Thistleclaw spat after it.
[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow] BLOOD
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Nov 4, 2007 19:40:41 GMT -5
Can you add another sentence or two onto the peltage? Other than that it's great!
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Nov 5, 2007 11:26:07 GMT -5
Modified it
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Nov 5, 2007 15:49:26 GMT -5
'tis okay. Accepted.
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