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Post by //Diamonte . x on Oct 14, 2007 11:31:41 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow] Diamondleaf
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow] ThunderClan
[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow] Warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow] 20 moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow] female
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] Long, soft white pelt that seems to glitter in the dun and moonlight with pale gray stripes on her back, spaced far apart. Her left eye is a pale ice blue her right is pale sky blue. Her tail has a long flowing tip.
[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow] wip
[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow] Diamondleaf used fiercely protective of her clan and friends, but that all chenged a when she first became a warrior and desovered the hatred that brewed inside her. Now she looks out for herself and only a few others, even now she does have a short temper and is not a cat to be trifled with.. Her fighting skills are foreign and impressive and she has honed them privately using what some would call 'illegal moves' to improve herself. Diamondleaf is bitter towards all and will not hesitate to attack a cat from her own Clan. She feeds off the hate.
[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow] Diamondleaf looked cautiously around her, she was playing tag with a few friends of hers. A small paw tapped her on the back lightly. "Tag!" called a voice. Diamondleaf leapt up in the air, faking a surprised yowl and then turned and raced after her friend, twisting and turning with all the skill she knew.
[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow] BLOOD
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Post by ::Fawn:: on Oct 14, 2007 13:30:55 GMT -5
Okay, I'm going to accept this, but I'll just tell you a couple of things.
You made a lot of spelling errors, so you might want to read your posts through and run a spell check before actually posting them. Also, you might want to add a little more detail to your descriptions and personality in the future. Oh, and you made some grammatical errors, so try to be aware of that. But, accepted =]
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Oct 15, 2007 10:45:36 GMT -5
Oh dear, I'll spell check it now, but thank you for accepting it. EDIT: I've spell checked it, I hope it's alot better now.
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Post by ::Fawn:: on Oct 16, 2007 20:44:20 GMT -5
It's much better, thanks =]
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