Dawneyes

[burntfoot]

[glow=green,2,300]Name: Dawneyes[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Clan: Thunderclan[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Position: warrior[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Age:10 moons[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Gender:she cat[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Peltage: dawneyes has thick creamed colored fur and has eyes that in a certain light look like the color of dawn. her tail has a little bit of white in the tip.[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Personality: dawneyes is a sweet loving cat that always thinks of others as equal even if they are in another clan, cats often find safety in her loving eyes even though dawneyes is easily loving she trust only her clan.[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]IC: dawneyes felt the entire clan staring at her. she had just come back from hunting and said she had seen rogues in thunderclan territory. Dawneyes felt so alone then she crept over to the warriors den and fell a sleep, her dreams were full of the rogues.[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Code:BLOOD[/glow]

[//Cindy// l u n a]

I like it, but two things: One, please add a sentence to the IC, Two: Ten moons is very young for a warrior. If you want her to be ten moons anyway, that's fine because it is possible. But consider making her a little older.

[&&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò]]

burntfoot, 10 moons is an apprentices age but if you make her 12 moons, she would be a beggining warrior. Ages:

Kits: 1 day - 6 moons
Apprentice: 6 moons - 12 moons
Warriors: 12 moons - probably 40 moons maybe more
Elders: 40 moons and up.

[burntfoot]

12 moons
many cats consitered dawneyes crazy after that until the rogues attacked.

[::Fawn::]

40 moons?!?!?! That can't be right! That's only four years old! I would say like, 100 moons.

[//Cindy// l u n a]

a) Fourty moons is actually less than four years, it's only three and four months.
b) Accepted
c) Here's a list that I think is a bit more correct:

Kit: 0 - 6
Apprentice: 6 - around 12
Warrior: around 12 - around 120, that's ten years old.
Elder: around 120 - at most 160, that's really old for a forest cat.