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Calica
Jul 15, 2007 18:36:22 GMT -5
Post by grasspaw101 on Jul 15, 2007 18:36:22 GMT -5
Name: Calica
Clan: None
Position: Loner
Age: 14 moons
Gender: She-cat
Peltage: Black and white spots, like a cheetah. Her eye's are yellow-green. Calica was built for speed.
Personality: Calica likes company very much. She loves to run with other cats if they accept her to being her friend. But after that she leaves to continue her lone streak.
IC: Calica gets into battle stance as she faces a dog. The dog slammed into Calica. She recovered quickly and unsheathed her claws. She drove her claws into the dogs neck and bite him on his back. The dog yelped and ran away. Calica couldn't help but feel a wave of proud engolf her.
Code: Blood
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Calica
Jul 19, 2007 18:39:33 GMT -5
Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Jul 19, 2007 18:39:33 GMT -5
Four moons is really young. That would be kit-aged. Can you make her a little older, or a little more kit-like?
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Calica
Jul 26, 2007 23:04:53 GMT -5
Post by grasspaw101 on Jul 26, 2007 23:04:53 GMT -5
WUPS! I meant to make her 14 moons! Stupid me!*goes to fix the stupid mistake*
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Calica
Jul 27, 2007 14:49:01 GMT -5
Post by ::Fawn:: on Jul 27, 2007 14:49:01 GMT -5
You made a couple grammar mistakes, like, you said "proud" instead of "pride" but, accepted.
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