Saborkit

[GiomanchSgath]

Name:saborkit

Clan:rogueclan

Position:kit-warrior


Age:3 moons

Gender:male

Peltage:tan colored pelt with white eartutfs

Picture:www.moldyskulls.com/media/prodimages/0204_sm.jpg

Personality:he dosent care what others think of him and he'll fight them to the end to prove it to them.

IC: Dropping low, saborkit crouched he was going to get that mouse. Stepping as quietly as possible, stalking it he broke a twig. The mouse shot forward in the undergrowth. Saborkit jump tripping on a fallen branch fell for ward his abnormaly big tooth stuck in the dirt. 'drats, i messed up again' Sabortooth thought.

Code:sping

[//Cindy// l u n a]

What do you mean in the personality when you say 'he knows hes different but he takes it like a true rouge would'? Please make the personality clearer and make both it and the peltage into full sentences.

[.Whitey.]

I know its not mi place but he means his cats tooth it's abnormally bigger compared to all other cats

[//Cindy// l u n a]

Thanks, Whitey. Then, Saborkit, can you make that a little clearer? And make sure you don't godmod with it - don't use it as a way to say that your cat is the most powerful.

[GiomanchSgath]

i know i know im not ive just had this guy planned out since i joined

[//Cindy// l u n a]

Accepted.

[GiomanchSgath]

rock on