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Post by bobo on May 12, 2007 12:24:02 GMT -5
glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow]lightningbolt
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow]shadow clan
[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow]warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow]20moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow]female
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow]red-orange,sky blue eyes
[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]
[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow]loyal, tom-cat magnet.nice.careing and responsibility
[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow]she was walking one morning searching for prey, and she saw thuderclan coming to our territy, so she had three choices they were, the first one was that she could fight for her life, the second is that she could go back to the camp and tell them, and the third was to tell them to go back.she was still searching and she heard them coming closer and closer and when they were close she leaped at one as she recognized one of them. It was Lightingclaw. One of my used to be friends when we were kittypets. [glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow] spring
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on May 13, 2007 14:53:44 GMT -5
Please make a peltage, which is what your cat looks like, and add some to the personality. Also, when you RP or write an IC, don't use first person (I, me). Please use third person (He, she, it, hers, him). Thanks.
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Post by bobo on May 13, 2007 20:14:44 GMT -5
there i fixed it
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on May 14, 2007 17:14:40 GMT -5
Alright, accepted. But make sure to say the name of your character at the beginning of the post. You might want to read some of the role playing threads before you start posting yourself.
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