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Post by anakinn on May 8, 2007 20:14:24 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow] Lightingheart
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow] Thunderclan
[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow] warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow] 20 moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow] male
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] fire red, ice blue eyes
[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]
[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow] Strong laiedback cat. Extremly loyal to his clan. She-cat magnet.
[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow] fireheart sat among the large trees surrounding the Thunderclan camp.When he heard pawsteps in the forest behind him and had 3 options, fight for his life, run back to camp, or run for his tail. He decided to fight for his life and his clan. So he waited for in a tall tree patiently. And then he saw his chance to attack. He sprang from out of the tree. He landed on a Rouge, the rouge yowled in pain and surprise. The rouge fled back to the Thunderclan camp. Fireheart had to save the camp from total destrution........
[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow] Spring
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on May 8, 2007 21:00:03 GMT -5
Can you change the name a bit? We try not to use the names of main characters in the books. Also, please add a little to the personality.
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Post by anakinn on May 9, 2007 18:11:53 GMT -5
There i fixed it
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on May 9, 2007 19:54:08 GMT -5
Okay. Accepted.
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