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Post by vampiretears on May 4, 2007 20:07:48 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow] Eaglefur
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow]ShadowClan
[glow=green,2,300]Position: [/glow]Warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow]6 moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender: [/glow]male
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage: [/glow]He has long gold fur, with a black tip on his tail
[glow=green,2,300]Personality: [/glow]Eaglefur is a cheerful apprentice, who's dream is to one day become the best warrior ever.
[glow=green,2,300]IC: [/glow]Eaglefur walked out of the warriors den. WOW he thought, it was so strange to see the ShadowClan camp from this point of view, instead of the apprentice den. Eaglefur was half way across the clearing when he was stopped in his tracks. He was a WARRIOR now! Eaglefur could jump for joy; he was smooth sailing to becoming the greatest warrior ever!
[glow=green,2,300]Code: [/glow] spring
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on May 5, 2007 18:46:09 GMT -5
Is it Eagle or Eaglepaw? Please either specify one or say explicitly that he uses both. Also, no apprentices are being accepted into any clan but WindClan.
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Post by vampiretears on May 6, 2007 15:46:57 GMT -5
Is this better?
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on May 6, 2007 18:43:39 GMT -5
Um... Yes, but that's an awfully young warrior! Accepted as soon as you change the age to older than ten moons. You don't have to post or anything, change it and you're good.
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