Brightshadow

[brightshadow]

[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow]Brightshadow

[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow]Thunderclan

[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow]Warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow] 15 moons

[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow]She-cat

[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] Mostly white with little orange and brown patches, white forepaws and dark brown hindpaws; beautiful bright green eyes

[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow] I am a very shy cat when it comes to meeting others... most of the time I am very quiet and keep things to myself only if I am alone and have no friends. I love making new friends and discovering new things with other cats!

My favourite fresh-kill is definitely a vole, no matter how scrawny or plump it is! (but I always love the plump ones best )


[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow] SPRING

[//Cindy// l u n a]

Everything is really good except that you need to write in third person. Take a look at some of the other bios for an example. (You could also just change the 'I' to 'she' or 'Brightshadow.') Also, you need an IC (In Character) as an example of your role-playing. It also should be in third person.

You could, in theory, use first person, but it would be harder to RP and you wouldn't be able to have more than one character. I strongly suggest using third person.