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Post by brushpaw on Apr 16, 2007 19:30:43 GMT -5
Brushpaw
Windclan
Apprentice
6 moons old
Tom
Light-brown pelt with dark brown paws and tail.Also a dark brown stripe across left side of side and light brown mask.
Very energetic and is a friend of Lakepaw who taught him how to nhunt while 4 moons of age. Very kind and keen while learning .
Lakepaw siloently escapes from the nursery at night. He rushes out into the uplands and searches for some prey.He scents something, he quietly moves closer and realizes its mouse. He punces on it with all his might and finishes it off in one bite.Quietly he sneaks back into camp right before the dawn patrol gets up. He places his kill in the fresh kill pile and then goes back to the nursery and acts as if nothing every happened.
Code:SPRING
is that good? ill b a cat whos 20 moons old before im accepted so ill hae 2 change name 2 oldpaw
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Apr 16, 2007 20:29:35 GMT -5
Can you please make and IC (In Character) as an example of your RPing?
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Apr 18, 2007 17:50:44 GMT -5
ICs have to be four sentances at least. That was only one run-on one...
Just a few things though: 1:: Don't post twice in a row. Instead, modify your first post by hitting the 'modify' button at it's upper right corner. 2:: Use proper spelling and grammer. It's really hard to read if you don't. Run-on sentances aren't the best, either.
Thanks!
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Post by brushpaw on Apr 24, 2007 15:41:01 GMT -5
well..... i did it mnow accept it
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Apr 24, 2007 15:49:56 GMT -5
Accepted
But please don't be so rude. I'm doing my job as an admin. I didn't notice that you'd modified, because I was slightly busy. Thank you for posting.
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Post by brushpaw on Apr 25, 2007 16:09:03 GMT -5
ok..... but thank you and sowwy for bein rude(yes thats ws!)
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