Darkpaw- RiverClan

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Name: Darkpaw

Clan: Riverclan

Position: Warrior

Age: 14 moons

Gender: she-cat

Peltage: I'm midnight, shadowed, pitch-dark looking she-cat with blood-red color stripes. I have beautiful blue eyes. I have LONG claws. I'm very muscular. I'm also skinny.

Personality: I follow the Warrior Code as if my life depends on it. I train so I can get stronger. I love to stay in the shadows. I always try to find a way to protect the clan with my life

IC: In the clan trouble was near.
"Darkpaw!" yelled Treeleaf, " They're coming!"
"Who?" I ask curiously.
"Our leader's biggest enemy."

Code:spring

[STREAMY ?!]

Good, but you're supposed to write in third person. Like this:

desertheart.proboards28.com/index.cgi?board=create&action=display&thread=1155497591

That's one of my bios. Just write everything in third person. ;D

[STREAMY ?!]

Oh, and also, you should try to make the IC a bit longer. I think.

[|g.O.l.d.Y|]

As Streamy said, you must write third person and add more detail to the IC.

[STREAMY ?!]

Yes, Goldy, that's what I said. I mean, cant you read??!?!?!?
JK, my big sister! *huggles*
As Goldy emphasized, please write in third person singular and make the IC longer.
;D