Ashpaw-Windclan

[Daggerpaw]

[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow]Ashpaw

[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow]Windclan

[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow]Apprentice

[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow]6 mooons

[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow]female

[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow]Black with a dieing fire red.

[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]

[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow]Kind, easy to get along with, short fuse, and loves to play and make someone she likes proud.

[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow]Ashpaw padded through a forest. She looked around wondering where she was exactly. She shrugged and kept going forward towards the other side. Where is this place anyway? Ashpaw thought. Her eyes darted around a moment then contineued on walking.

[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow]Spring

[::Fawn::]

Okay, I know I'm not an admin, or staff or anything, but you don't have a description, and you should probably make your IC and Personality a bit longer, cause I know Cindy...likes....umm, what's the phrase.....Descriptive bios??

[//Cindy// l u n a]

Meh, I'm not that picky about personalities and appearance.... Really as long as you know it it's okay. But the IC, for the record should be at least four sentances, and it's best if there's more than just discription of what's around and happening, although you seem to be quite good at that, Daggerpaw. Maybe add a sentance of dialouge between your charrie and a random made-up one? Or some insight into their mind?

Anyway, to put that paragraph into fewer words, can you add on a sentance to the IC? Thanks.

[Daggerpaw]

That better or do I need to do somemore?

[//Cindy// l u n a]

Accepted!