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Post by spottedstar on Jan 13, 2007 6:54:32 GMT -5
Name,Spottedpelt Gender,She cat Moons,13 Clan,Riverclan Rank,Warrior Peltage,Ginger fur she has 2 moon shaped spots along her spine and she has sparkling green eyes Personality,Very loyal will do anything for her clan.She is sometimes shy.But she is very sweet.she hates to kill anyone although she is a wonderful fighter. RP,Spottedpelt crouched on the sand the moon making her spots turn silver.Her ears were pricked as she waited for some prey to come along.suddly she heard a scuffling in the reeds she pounced with the speed of lightning and killed it.her green eyes glowed for this was her first kill as a warrior.she then took the prey back to camp. Code, Spring
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Post by ~Rainstripe~ on Jan 13, 2007 12:28:08 GMT -5
dont mean to butt in but you need to create a new thread and copy the real code to be accepted -hey dont worry thats what i did the first time too!!good luck with that!!!!!!!! *rainstripe* p.s. i can tell u in the cbox if u want ill be there!!!!
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Post by spottedstar on Jan 13, 2007 20:02:38 GMT -5
thank you
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Post by ô Moonshadow ô on Jan 14, 2007 20:20:33 GMT -5
good description! i think spottedpelt sounds like a good cat, great job! hopefully, you'll get accepted very soon!
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Post by ~Silverwind~ on Jan 18, 2007 18:47:52 GMT -5
Great Job on it!
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Post by Miss Midnight|| on Jan 20, 2007 14:39:01 GMT -5
I'd like it if you used proper spelling and punctuation, and please make a longer personality.
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Post by Miss Midnight|| on Jan 21, 2007 18:05:26 GMT -5
Your RP example is not long enough, please make it at least four sentences, and not tiny sentences like, "Because she wanted to."
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Post by Miss Midnight|| on Jan 22, 2007 16:47:33 GMT -5
Accepted. ^^
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