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Delilah
Nov 4, 2006 15:30:45 GMT -5
Post by +~MoSsY~+(catsrule) on Nov 4, 2006 15:30:45 GMT -5
Name: Delilah Clan: none (kittypet) Position:Kittypet Age: 18 moons Gender: she-cat Peltage: Delilah has white fur with gray colered points(tips of ears, tailect.). She has beautiful blue eyes the color of the ocean. Her pelt is soft and her fur is short. Picture: vidacattery.com/1epaboo.jpgPersonality: Delilah is very sweet and likes to be around other cats. Though she lives in a twoleg nest she loves to go outside and stare into the woods. She is rarley mean unless you attack her or insult her. Delilah makes friends with every cat that will be her friend. IC: Delilah was sitting on her backyard fence looking around for some one. "I wonder what it is like in the forest" she mumbled to herself. "Oh well I know that the forest cats would not like a kittypet in their territory" she meowed sadly. Delilah walked on the edge of the fence until she came to the front of her owners nest. But before she could get on to the ground she lost her balance and fell in the bushes outside the fence"OUCH!" delilah yowled. "Great how am I going to get back over" just as soon as she the words had come out of her mouth she heard her owners voice call "Delilah come here is time for supper!". "Oh no" delilah mumbled "they will never find me out here."................. Code: Spring
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Delilah
Nov 4, 2006 17:29:38 GMT -5
Post by coddle the infectionxxx on Nov 4, 2006 17:29:38 GMT -5
You have to ask someone else... I'm a perfectionist, that always over does stuff, so you'll want one of the kiddi's with their names in green. They arent as... knit picky as I am anyway. =].
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Delilah
Nov 4, 2006 21:21:16 GMT -5
Post by *~Sunny~* on Nov 4, 2006 21:21:16 GMT -5
It's pretty nice. Try working on your capitalization and punctuation. Also try broadening your description. Other than that, you're accepted.
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Delilah
Nov 4, 2006 21:23:23 GMT -5
Post by +~MoSsY~+(catsrule) on Nov 4, 2006 21:23:23 GMT -5
Thanx I'll work on it
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