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Post by thornpaw18 on Oct 6, 2006 17:48:24 GMT -5
name-thornpelt
gender-she-cat
clan-windclan
rank-warrior
position-same has rank
peltage-she is a black and white manx with ice blue eyes.She has really nothing speicial about her. Her tail is like nubzee's. Her ice blue eyes are very much like a frozen river.
personality- She is a loving kitty that just became a warrior. She was a close friend to Yellowfang.She is fun to be around,but feirce in battle. She is very kind to kits and queens, one day hoping to have a litter of her own. She adores a certain apprentice.
history-when she was just a baby her mother died.Her father killed her mother and when she found out she killed him. She is a ruthless bloodthirsty kit and apprentice. Now she is muturer and calmer. Now she seeks anouther bloodthirsty kill, but it's not a murder, it's her life has a Windclan queen.
Ic-Thornpelt walked though the moor. She spotted a tom. Sghe didn't recagnize him at first. So she walked closer. The tom's scent was strongly windclan. He looked like an apprentice. She breathed in his scent. She knew it was Eeyorepaw. She went up to greet him, but then he was gone. Gone like every thing ealse in her life. She awoke in her knew warrior bed. It was a dream. But it seemed to her like life.
code-[glow=yellow,2,300]SPRING[/glow]
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Oct 6, 2006 17:51:07 GMT -5
Looks good to me although it has a few spelling errors! Accepted and welcome
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Post by thornpaw18 on Oct 7, 2006 14:39:36 GMT -5
thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!
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