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Redstar
Aug 1, 2006 13:28:01 GMT -5
Post by limabeanbean on Aug 1, 2006 13:28:01 GMT -5
name-Redstar
clan-Thunder clan
position-Apprentice
age-10 moons
gender-she-cat
peltage-Redstar is orange with a red star on her tail
personality-Redstar is happy, energetic, and will always be loyal to Thunder clan.
IC-Redstar was hungry and food was scarce that year so every one was hungry. Then out of the corner of her eye Redstar saw a huge rat. The rat turned its head saw Redstar and dashed away. Redstar thought that the rat was to fast for her and then chased it into camp. To her delight two other cats saw the rat and helped her corner it and kill it.
code-spring
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Redstar
Aug 1, 2006 13:40:59 GMT -5
Post by The Only Froggems YOU KNOW! on Aug 1, 2006 13:40:59 GMT -5
have you- by any chance- read the Warriors books?
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Redstar
Aug 1, 2006 14:32:08 GMT -5
Post by limabeanbean on Aug 1, 2006 14:32:08 GMT -5
i am allmost don with the first book
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Redstar
Aug 1, 2006 19:42:12 GMT -5
Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Aug 1, 2006 19:42:12 GMT -5
As Red'star' is an apprentice she would be called Redpaw. Please make the personality longer and I'm not sure she would have a star on her tail...I haven't seen that before.
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Redstar
Aug 1, 2006 20:32:20 GMT -5
Post by limabeanbean on Aug 1, 2006 20:32:20 GMT -5
ok i will redo that
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Redstar
Aug 1, 2006 20:47:22 GMT -5
Post by limabeanbean on Aug 1, 2006 20:47:22 GMT -5
name-Redpaw clan-Thunder clan position-Apprentice age-10 moons gender-she-cat peltage-Redpaw is orange with redish paws. personality-Redpaw is happy, energetic, and will always be loyal to Thunder clan. She enjoys eating mice and bunnies and every now and then she will eat a bit of grass (it’s good for the digestion). She does what she’s told without hesitation and never questions it. IC-Redpaw was hungry and food was scarce that year so every one was hungry. Then out of the corner of her eye Redpaw saw a huge rat. The rat turned its head saw Redpaw and dashed away. Redpaw thought that the rat was to fast for her and then chased it into camp. To her delight two other cats saw the rat and helped her corner it and kill it. code-spring ;D
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Aug 2, 2006 1:01:22 GMT -5
Better, I'm a little reluctant about the roleplay sample, but accepted.
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Redstar
Aug 2, 2006 11:24:00 GMT -5
Post by limabeanbean on Aug 2, 2006 11:24:00 GMT -5
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