Post by rainpelt on Jun 19, 2006 17:36:39 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow]
Rainfrost
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow]
ShadowClan
[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow]
Warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow]
37 Moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow]
She-Cat
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow]
Rainfrost is like that of her name. Her fur is white underneathe and upon the top lays a brownish-muddy color. Her eyes are round and glistening, almost as if they could penetrate into another feline's soul. Her two orbs allow her to see incredibly well in the day and even better when the sun has fallen and night swells over the land. Rainfrost's claws are sharp and constantly sharpened to insure a greater effect on her foes. She has teeth that are barbed and ready to sink into an enemy's flesh. Her ears are constantly pricked, especially on a hunting or border patrol. Unlike most cats, Rainfrost relies on her sense of sound instead of the smell. She will use the smell occasionally, but prefers the abilities of her own ears. Rainfrost's tail is long and allows her to keep her balance, even on the most narrow or wobbly surfaces. Her pelt is constantly cleaned, and looks almost like new rain upon the dirt when the setting sun hits her just right.
[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]
[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow]
Rainfrost is a very wise, strong warrior. Though she may not look it, she has plenty of courage in her heart. Rainfrost is a cat that you do not want to mess with if you can help it. She is never afraid to speak her mind, especially at a gathering. She is headstrong and rather ill-patient. Like some Shadowclan warriors, she likes to stalk around the thunderpath border. She enjoys battles, but can't stand seeing her comrades fall. Rainfrost has a strong hatred of WindClan cats after what happened to her mother. She is vicious and extremely short-tempered when it comes to speaking with them. Rainfrost, however, is calm and motherly. She would do anything to protect her apprentice, the kits in the nursery, or another warrior she cares deeply for. She is also one of the few cats, who enjoys hearing the elder's stories. She gets along well with all of the cats in her clan, and even a bit of the ThunderClan and RiverClan cats, but she will not even speak to any cat of WindClan.
[glow=green,2,300]History:[/glow]
Rainfrost grew up in ShadowClan. Unlike some other cats, she had no important parents. Her mother and father were both of ShadowClan, as were her brother and sister. Rainfrost - Rainkit at the time - was unusually lazy when she was a kit. She never liked to do anything except sleep curled up next to her mother. Afraid their kit was sick or even deaf, Rainkit's parents went to the medicine cat. The old, wise cat looked down at the helpless kit who had opened her eyes a couple moons ago, but still didn't like to venture outside. The medicine cat smiled and told the worried parents that she was fine. She just wasn't as curious and spirited as her kin, the medicine cat explained. Relieved, but a bit disappointed, Rainkit's father - Jadedfang - was determined to make her into a fine warrior. And that he did. When Rainkit was finally apprenticed and given her new name, Rainpaw, she was given to her father. Jadedfang couldn't have been more pleased as he gave his daughter a tour of the forest. This happiness wasn't going to last, however. Late one night, when the clan was sound asleep, three Shadowclan cats, one being Rainpaw's brother, Copperpaw, snuck out of the camp and went to hunt on WindClan territory. Rainpaw awoke to the screeches and howls of a cat racing into camp. It was Copperpaw! He told the ShadowClan warriors that WindClan had attacked them on a nightly hunt, yet, as Rainpaw suspected, her brother was not telling the clan the complete truth. Enraged at seeing his son bleeding and dying, Jadedfang and the other warriors, darted off to battle with WindClan. Rainpaw followed her mentor into the battle, looking behind her at Copperpaw, whose life was in the paws of StarClan. Rainpaw and her fellow clan mates, clashed with the WindClan cats. An assortment of snarls and yowls filled the air, making it shake and crackle. Rainpaw watched in horror as a WindClan cat pinned Jadedfang down. It was against the warrior code to kill another cat, but this WindClan cat was different. He slashed Rainpaw's father's throat and let the blood of her beloved mentor and father run, soaking into the soil. Rainpaw, furious at the WindClan cat, lunged at him, tackling the cat down and biting into his shoulder. The tabby tom shook her loose, sending her spinning over the ground. Before Rainpaw could get to her paws, the tabby cat lunged at her. He bowled her over and sent her spinning into a rock. With a yowl, darkness flooded her gaze, and Rainpaw blacked out.
***
Rainpaw awoke in the ShadowClan camp. Her paws throbbed and she had cobwebs on her shoulder and haunches. She tried to stand, but the medicine cat urged her to rest. Rainpaw curled up into a small ball, closing her eyes and resting for a few days. When she was healed, she came out of the den of the medicine cat and stretched her aching muscles. She was unaware of all the cats that had died that night. She walked to the warriors den to see her mother, but horror struck her full blast. Her brother, Copperpaw, her mother, Speckledfur, her father, Jadedfang, and her twin sister, Snowpaw, had all been killed. Her kin was gone, in one night. Rainpaw bowed her head, mourning for her lost family. That night, she was given a new mentor, Crimsontail. Crimsontail was a wise old tom, that would soon be joining the elders. But before he did so, he wanted to have one last apprentice. He had taken a fond liking to Rainpaw and offered to mentor her. Rainpaw and Crimsontail trained for nearly 4 moons before a horrible storm brought doom upon their clan. Rainpaw and Crimsontail were out on a hunting patrol. It had begun to rain, very, very hard. Rainpaw and Crimsontail tried to stick together, but it was too much for them and they were split up. Rainpaw found her way back to the camp, leaping into the apprentice den to hide from the rain that rattled outside. She suddenly realized, that Crimsontail was not coming into the camp. She raced out of camp and found her mentor, sprawled out on a rock, panting and gasping for breath. Rainpaw raced to Crimsontail and bit into his scruff, dragging him back to camp and fighting against the storm. When she returned, she gave Crimsontail to the medicine cat and waited until the rain died away. For saving her mentor's life, she was awarded her warrior name. Rainfrost. Rainfrost smiled in obvious pride and looked at Crimsontail as he walked towards her, licking her head and purring his approval. A moon later, Crimsontail retired from his warrior duties and became an elder of ShadowClan. Rainfrost was truly happy that she had been given her warrior name. And from that day on, for many moons that passed, she learned courage, wisdom, and pain. But in turn, she became a great and noble warrior of ShadowClan.
(I hope it's all right that I added that in there...)
[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow]
Rainfrost snarled viciously. She kept her body close to the ground. Her eyes shot at the hole where she was targetting. Just a little bit more... She waited for the right time to strike, her tail lashing back and forth as her paws kneeded the ground. Rainfrost crouched low to the dirt and hissed out furiously. Suddenly, there was movement. Rainfrost darted towards it, vanishing into the shadows of the large hole. There was a hiss and spitting sound and then dead silence. Rainfrost immerged, holding a large adder in her jaws. She plopped it down on the grass and panted to rest a bit. "Foxdung!" She spat at the snake. Once rested, Rainfrost scooped the snake into her jaws and began to trot towards the camp, picking up her food along the way. With her jaws filled to the maximum with prey, she set them down on the fresh-kill pile. Rainfrost yawned and stretched, her claws flexing out. She turned and looked at her camp, happy and peaceful at the moment. Rainfrost smiled, wondering how long the tranquility would last.
[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow]
Spring
Rainfrost
[glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow]
ShadowClan
[glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow]
Warrior
[glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow]
37 Moons
[glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow]
She-Cat
[glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow]
Rainfrost is like that of her name. Her fur is white underneathe and upon the top lays a brownish-muddy color. Her eyes are round and glistening, almost as if they could penetrate into another feline's soul. Her two orbs allow her to see incredibly well in the day and even better when the sun has fallen and night swells over the land. Rainfrost's claws are sharp and constantly sharpened to insure a greater effect on her foes. She has teeth that are barbed and ready to sink into an enemy's flesh. Her ears are constantly pricked, especially on a hunting or border patrol. Unlike most cats, Rainfrost relies on her sense of sound instead of the smell. She will use the smell occasionally, but prefers the abilities of her own ears. Rainfrost's tail is long and allows her to keep her balance, even on the most narrow or wobbly surfaces. Her pelt is constantly cleaned, and looks almost like new rain upon the dirt when the setting sun hits her just right.
[glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]
[glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow]
Rainfrost is a very wise, strong warrior. Though she may not look it, she has plenty of courage in her heart. Rainfrost is a cat that you do not want to mess with if you can help it. She is never afraid to speak her mind, especially at a gathering. She is headstrong and rather ill-patient. Like some Shadowclan warriors, she likes to stalk around the thunderpath border. She enjoys battles, but can't stand seeing her comrades fall. Rainfrost has a strong hatred of WindClan cats after what happened to her mother. She is vicious and extremely short-tempered when it comes to speaking with them. Rainfrost, however, is calm and motherly. She would do anything to protect her apprentice, the kits in the nursery, or another warrior she cares deeply for. She is also one of the few cats, who enjoys hearing the elder's stories. She gets along well with all of the cats in her clan, and even a bit of the ThunderClan and RiverClan cats, but she will not even speak to any cat of WindClan.
[glow=green,2,300]History:[/glow]
Rainfrost grew up in ShadowClan. Unlike some other cats, she had no important parents. Her mother and father were both of ShadowClan, as were her brother and sister. Rainfrost - Rainkit at the time - was unusually lazy when she was a kit. She never liked to do anything except sleep curled up next to her mother. Afraid their kit was sick or even deaf, Rainkit's parents went to the medicine cat. The old, wise cat looked down at the helpless kit who had opened her eyes a couple moons ago, but still didn't like to venture outside. The medicine cat smiled and told the worried parents that she was fine. She just wasn't as curious and spirited as her kin, the medicine cat explained. Relieved, but a bit disappointed, Rainkit's father - Jadedfang - was determined to make her into a fine warrior. And that he did. When Rainkit was finally apprenticed and given her new name, Rainpaw, she was given to her father. Jadedfang couldn't have been more pleased as he gave his daughter a tour of the forest. This happiness wasn't going to last, however. Late one night, when the clan was sound asleep, three Shadowclan cats, one being Rainpaw's brother, Copperpaw, snuck out of the camp and went to hunt on WindClan territory. Rainpaw awoke to the screeches and howls of a cat racing into camp. It was Copperpaw! He told the ShadowClan warriors that WindClan had attacked them on a nightly hunt, yet, as Rainpaw suspected, her brother was not telling the clan the complete truth. Enraged at seeing his son bleeding and dying, Jadedfang and the other warriors, darted off to battle with WindClan. Rainpaw followed her mentor into the battle, looking behind her at Copperpaw, whose life was in the paws of StarClan. Rainpaw and her fellow clan mates, clashed with the WindClan cats. An assortment of snarls and yowls filled the air, making it shake and crackle. Rainpaw watched in horror as a WindClan cat pinned Jadedfang down. It was against the warrior code to kill another cat, but this WindClan cat was different. He slashed Rainpaw's father's throat and let the blood of her beloved mentor and father run, soaking into the soil. Rainpaw, furious at the WindClan cat, lunged at him, tackling the cat down and biting into his shoulder. The tabby tom shook her loose, sending her spinning over the ground. Before Rainpaw could get to her paws, the tabby cat lunged at her. He bowled her over and sent her spinning into a rock. With a yowl, darkness flooded her gaze, and Rainpaw blacked out.
***
Rainpaw awoke in the ShadowClan camp. Her paws throbbed and she had cobwebs on her shoulder and haunches. She tried to stand, but the medicine cat urged her to rest. Rainpaw curled up into a small ball, closing her eyes and resting for a few days. When she was healed, she came out of the den of the medicine cat and stretched her aching muscles. She was unaware of all the cats that had died that night. She walked to the warriors den to see her mother, but horror struck her full blast. Her brother, Copperpaw, her mother, Speckledfur, her father, Jadedfang, and her twin sister, Snowpaw, had all been killed. Her kin was gone, in one night. Rainpaw bowed her head, mourning for her lost family. That night, she was given a new mentor, Crimsontail. Crimsontail was a wise old tom, that would soon be joining the elders. But before he did so, he wanted to have one last apprentice. He had taken a fond liking to Rainpaw and offered to mentor her. Rainpaw and Crimsontail trained for nearly 4 moons before a horrible storm brought doom upon their clan. Rainpaw and Crimsontail were out on a hunting patrol. It had begun to rain, very, very hard. Rainpaw and Crimsontail tried to stick together, but it was too much for them and they were split up. Rainpaw found her way back to the camp, leaping into the apprentice den to hide from the rain that rattled outside. She suddenly realized, that Crimsontail was not coming into the camp. She raced out of camp and found her mentor, sprawled out on a rock, panting and gasping for breath. Rainpaw raced to Crimsontail and bit into his scruff, dragging him back to camp and fighting against the storm. When she returned, she gave Crimsontail to the medicine cat and waited until the rain died away. For saving her mentor's life, she was awarded her warrior name. Rainfrost. Rainfrost smiled in obvious pride and looked at Crimsontail as he walked towards her, licking her head and purring his approval. A moon later, Crimsontail retired from his warrior duties and became an elder of ShadowClan. Rainfrost was truly happy that she had been given her warrior name. And from that day on, for many moons that passed, she learned courage, wisdom, and pain. But in turn, she became a great and noble warrior of ShadowClan.
(I hope it's all right that I added that in there...)
[glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow]
Rainfrost snarled viciously. She kept her body close to the ground. Her eyes shot at the hole where she was targetting. Just a little bit more... She waited for the right time to strike, her tail lashing back and forth as her paws kneeded the ground. Rainfrost crouched low to the dirt and hissed out furiously. Suddenly, there was movement. Rainfrost darted towards it, vanishing into the shadows of the large hole. There was a hiss and spitting sound and then dead silence. Rainfrost immerged, holding a large adder in her jaws. She plopped it down on the grass and panted to rest a bit. "Foxdung!" She spat at the snake. Once rested, Rainfrost scooped the snake into her jaws and began to trot towards the camp, picking up her food along the way. With her jaws filled to the maximum with prey, she set them down on the fresh-kill pile. Rainfrost yawned and stretched, her claws flexing out. She turned and looked at her camp, happy and peaceful at the moment. Rainfrost smiled, wondering how long the tranquility would last.
[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow]
Spring
Well once you change the name, I think it'll be fine, but wait with the RPing until an admin accepts it.
