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Post by redcloud on Jun 10, 2006 16:47:20 GMT -5
Name:Redcloud Clan:thunderclan Position:warrior Age:15 moons Gender:she-cat Peltage:beautiful dark ginger she-cat with green eyes Personality:very strong brave courageous loyal speaks her mind has a short temper at times is a leader. I.C:Redcloud was drowning in the river when all of a sudden a beautiful golden tabby with amber eyes plunged into the river to her rescue. Redcloud felt her underneath her has she struggled to bring her to shore.Redcloud woke up in a den that smelt of herbs and riverclan cat scent.Then she noticed a bundle of golden tabby fur beside her. codeword:spring
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Post by rex. on Jun 10, 2006 23:59:56 GMT -5
-yes nine moons is way too young for a warrior
- I would make the IC alot longer
-look for the code in the rules
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Post by redcloud on Jun 12, 2006 16:22:12 GMT -5
ok thanks
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Jun 13, 2006 0:47:27 GMT -5
That's still not the codeword. Please make the IC a bit longer please.
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Post by redcloud on Jun 13, 2006 12:45:31 GMT -5
ok
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Post by rex. on Jun 18, 2006 22:08:38 GMT -5
accepted
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