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Post by silentpelt on Jun 9, 2006 23:00:13 GMT -5
Name:Mothheart
Clan:Thunderclan
Position:Warrior
Age:23 moons
Gender:She-cat
Peltage:Long haired lite brown she-cat tinged with silver around her muzzle. She has beautiful blue eyes and a dark brown spot on her forehead.
Picture:*Optional*
Personality:Is a brave, wise, and strong Warrior who shows campassion for those weaker than herself. She is kind towards her clan mates and is one of the most loyal cats you would ever meet.
IC:Mothheart lowered herself into a crouch, her eyes focused on the mouse up ahead of her, nibbling on a seed it held in its paws. Slowly paw, by paw, she drew herself towards the mouse. It didn't seem to notice Mothheart creeping up behind it. After pinpointing her prey one last time, Mothheart sprang, kicking up leaves from the forest floor as she rose. The mouse tried to dive for cover, but she was to quick for it. Mothheart had it under her paws in seconds. She gave it one swift killing bite to the neck, then bounded back to camp, the dead rodent clamped safely in her jaws.
Code:spring
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Post by coddle the infectionxxx on Jun 10, 2006 0:35:00 GMT -5
Personally I think you may want to make your description a weeeee bit longer, but I am no admin.
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Jun 10, 2006 3:42:05 GMT -5
I agree, could you please add at least one more sentence to the Peltage? ~:Goldy:~
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Post by silentpelt on Jun 10, 2006 10:22:38 GMT -5
There I fixed it.
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Jun 10, 2006 11:00:33 GMT -5
Accepted
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