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Post by spottedstump on Apr 3, 2006 21:25:16 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Name:[/glow] Spottedpaw [glow=green,2,300]Clan:[/glow] RiverClan [glow=green,2,300]Position:[/glow] Apprentice [glow=green,2,300]Age:[/glow] 8 moons [glow=green,2,300]Gender:[/glow] Female [glow=green,2,300]Peltage:[/glow]Spottedpaw has a [mostly] DarkBrown/Lightbrown tortiseshell {{Holycow! I can't spell today!}} pelt. [glow=green,2,300]Picture:[/glow]I'm Sorrry. I don't have one. [glow=green,2,300]Personality:[/glow]She's really nice, but really stubborn, too. She's always trying to prove herself. She's got some kind of mindset thinking she needs to prove herself. She'll try to be friends, even if you try to drop a hint you want her gone, she won't leave. [glow=green,2,300]IC:[/glow]Spottedpaw shifted her eyes, she scented prey, heard it, too. Rabbit. She fell into a hunting crouch. Rabbit hears you, Rabbit hears you, Thoughts flew through her mind. I'll get it, for the Elders! Yeah... She saw it, it saw her. Spottedpaw lept for the Rabbit, killing the creature with one strike. Yess..[glow=green,2,300]Code:[/glow]Spring
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Apr 3, 2006 21:35:49 GMT -5
i like it!! well done.....there is nothing you need to change
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Post by spottedstump on Apr 3, 2006 21:45:13 GMT -5
really? Thanks!
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Post by icefang on Apr 3, 2006 22:34:33 GMT -5
Understand that you can't RP as it yet... an admin needs to accept you!
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Apr 4, 2006 10:55:21 GMT -5
Can you add a bit on the personality? Not all apprentices are the same. Some a mean, sweet, shy, stubborn, outgoing, etc. Everything else is fine
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Post by spottedstump on Apr 4, 2006 22:23:51 GMT -5
Sorry. She's really nice, but really stubborn, too. She's always trying to prove herself. She's got some kind of mindset thinking she needs to prove herself. She'll try to be friends, even if you try to drop a hint you want her gone, she won't leave.
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Apr 5, 2006 17:42:58 GMT -5
Accepted. Welcome!
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