Frostpaw of Shadowclan

[frostfang]

[glow=blue,2,300]Name:[/glow] Frostpaw

[glow=blue,2,300]Clan:[/glow] Shadowclan

[glow=blue,2,300]Position:[/glow] Apprentice

[glow=blue,2,300]Age:[/glow] 8 moons

[glow=blue,2,300]Gender:[/glow] Tom

[glow=blue,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] Very Light Blue(like frostfur's pelt color) with a black tail

[glow=blue,2,300]Picture:[/glow]

[glow=blue,2,300]Personality:[/glow] nice and sincere, can be feirce when mad, also daring

[glow=blue,2,300]IC:[/glow] Frostkit was wondering around when he saw the twoleg place. He was a curious little cat, so he started walking over to the twoleg place. He thought The garden was a wonderous for a cat to be. Then a monster came up to him and a twoleg came out. Frostkit started running as fast as aq little kit could, but the twoleg grabbed him. He Thought "Think quick frostkit", and he did. He bit the twoleg with his ferociously sharp teeth on the thumb and jumped out of the twolegs hands. he ran back to camp. After that wonderously brave display, he became frostpaw, a brave, daring cat.

[glow=blue,2,300]Code:[/glow] Winter

[*Simply Seasle*]

you have to put a ic or you won't be accpeted and you spelled Frostpaw wrong, and appentices are under 10 moons(don't get mad at me for telling you whats wrong please)

[frostfang]

ty, but i don't really get what IC means. and frostpaw will be 8 moons then

[*Simply Seasle*]

you can click on modify on the top of one of posts and change it(don't put a [/quote] after winter) IC means writing about something that happened to your cat(it can be anything:they went hunting, or they went swimming, something like that)

[frostfang]

i found out what ic means.

IC:
When frostpaw was frostkit, he snook to the twoleg place, and almost became a kittypet, but escaped before he got taken away

[*Simply Seasle*]

desribe it in detail EX:Seawind walked easily over to the clump of catnip and pulled some out.Being sent to gather some catnip just like a appentice!She should be doing something better!Seawind salked off to hunt;she would return for the catnip later.

[frostfang]

oh

Frostkit was wondering around when he saw the twoleg place. He was a curious little cat, so he started walking over to the twoleg place. He thought The garden was a wonderous for a cat to be. Then a monster came up to him and a twoleg came out. Frostkit started running as fast as aq little kit could, but the twoleg grabbed him. He Thought "Think quick frostkit", and he did. He bit the twoleg with his ferociously sharp teeth on the thumb and jumped out of the twolegs hands. he ran back to camp. After that wonderously brave display, he became frostpaw, a brave, daring cat.

[rex.]

umm...i think you should probebly go look at someone elses Bio as a refrence. also, the peltage description is a bit unrealistic (the light blue part) i sugguest a silvery or blue grey?
here. this is a link to a completed bio, you can look at the IC on that as a refrence. typically, its what you would write in a post if you were RPing...try to make this IC at least 4-5+ sentances long (normal posts can be shorter, but the bio IC is to show people how well you RP), k? dont want you to get nagged too much by the other admins^^;

goldkit.proboards59.com/index.cgi?board=signup&action=display&thread=1135732243
its one of my charas from a different site...he's here too though..>>

[frostfang]

is that good?

[rex.]

oh, thats good! :-)

[rex.]

umm brb

[frostfang]

when i say light blue i mean like white with a dab of light blue

[frostfang]

kind of like frostfur's description in the book

[frostfang]

that is where i got the idea of my cat, frostpaw, from frostfur

[rex.]

yeah okay. do you know how to modify your posts so you dont have to keep reposting things? at the top of your posts there is an option that says modify. if you click that, you can fix your mistakes:)