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Post by snowstorm on Jan 5, 2006 15:51:26 GMT -5
snowstorm
Clan: WindClan
Gender: she-cat
Age: 10 moons
Postition: Warrior
Peltage: snowstorm has white fur with baby blue eyes
Personality: snowstorm is kind and friendly and makes friends everywhere she goes! She also loves to help kits and play with them!
IC: snowstorm walked around and saw a kit running as fast as it could away from a dog but the dog was much faster... snowstorm ran over and gets the dog to chase her so the kit can run to safty. snowstorm was a little scared while the dog chased her but soon found a tree and ran up. The dog after about a few minutes left her and she ran off to find the kit.
Code: Winter
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Jan 5, 2006 16:20:01 GMT -5
There's a few things you need to fix.
You need to add the descpription of your cat like what color fur, color eyes, any extra features.
And the IC has a few grammatical errors. Role-playing is in third person. Ex: ran not runs
Welcome and thanks for joining my site ;D
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Post by snowstorm on Jan 27, 2006 21:58:20 GMT -5
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Jan 28, 2006 9:55:05 GMT -5
It's cool! I love it. I saw you
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