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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 14, 2005 19:24:27 GMT -5
Rainpelt
loner,going to join clan
9 moons
tom
dark blue eyes, gray and black with a bit of white fur
loyal and quiet very friendly to anycat
Rainpelt looked at the sky, it was going to storm that was good.(i don't know)clan needed water and they would get it.Rainpelt spotted a kit watching the sky."Why are you here"Rainpelt asked.The kit meowed "To watch the storm"."Good then I will watch it with you"Rainpelt meowed.
dessie, Rainpelt can go into whatever clan he is needed in most
autumn
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Post by rex. on Dec 18, 2005 10:05:57 GMT -5
really hard to understand. you need to fix the rank, your title should be the name of your cat, and you spelt autumn wrong.
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 18, 2005 10:25:33 GMT -5
Is that better?
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Post by rex. on Dec 18, 2005 10:49:42 GMT -5
sure...but dont you have any idea where you would like rain to go?
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 18, 2005 11:05:52 GMT -5
not really i want him to go into the clan that needs toms most but i don't want him in Rougeclan i'll make a cat for that later.
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Post by rex. on Dec 18, 2005 15:22:19 GMT -5
i would say shadow clan needs her most they have the least members, im pretty sure
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 18, 2005 20:46:03 GMT -5
Yah! That's true.
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 26, 2005 21:11:10 GMT -5
okay shadowclan it is
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 27, 2005 15:29:53 GMT -5
Except you have to add another part to her name. Like Rainpelt or Rainstorm
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 29, 2005 20:33:36 GMT -5
okay and he is a TOM not a she-cat
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