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Seapaw
Dec 6, 2005 20:24:52 GMT -5
Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 6, 2005 20:24:52 GMT -5
Name: seapaw
Clan: WindClan
Rank: appentice
Age: 9 moons
Gender: she-cat
Description:long silver fur and blue-green eyes
Personality: bright and cheerful always curious;troublemaker
IC:seakit sank her teeth into the mouse letting out a purr of happiness "seakit seakit get back here NOW!!" seakit's eyes narrowed crossly as she trotted back to camp. Somecat grabbed seakit and meowed "i bet your mother will love to hear about how you went out of camp again", as seakit was dragged into camp her mother thought this is the 6th time this moon.
Code:autumn
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Seapaw
Dec 6, 2005 20:28:11 GMT -5
Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 6, 2005 20:28:11 GMT -5
Can you add like one or two more sentences on your IC:, please?
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Seapaw
Dec 7, 2005 17:48:06 GMT -5
Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 7, 2005 17:48:06 GMT -5
okay somecat (i don't know names) grabbed seakit and meowed "i bet your mother will love to hear about how you went out of camp again" as seakit was dragged into camp her mother thought this is the 6th time this moon
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Seapaw
Dec 7, 2005 18:01:43 GMT -5
Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 7, 2005 18:01:43 GMT -5
Ok. Next time, click on "Modify" at the top of your post. That way you can fix your post that way. I'll do it for you this time
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Seapaw
Dec 7, 2005 18:02:48 GMT -5
Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 7, 2005 18:02:48 GMT -5
Accepted!
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Seapaw
Dec 7, 2005 18:08:32 GMT -5
Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 7, 2005 18:08:32 GMT -5
thanks i don't know much about these sites so i'll remember that
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Seapaw
Dec 7, 2005 18:11:36 GMT -5
Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 7, 2005 18:11:36 GMT -5
:DYou'll learn Umm I noticed that you are acting as "Firestorm". You can't do that because she is not your character, she belongs to someone. You can only role-pay as Seakit (or any other characters you make later on). Thats how role-play works. This is confusing...
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Seapaw
Dec 7, 2005 18:13:30 GMT -5
Post by *Simply Seasle* on Dec 7, 2005 18:13:30 GMT -5
oh sorry i won't do that again
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Seapaw
Dec 7, 2005 18:16:21 GMT -5
Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Dec 7, 2005 18:16:21 GMT -5
No problem! Like I said, you'll learn. I did ;D
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