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Icepaw
Nov 24, 2005 12:17:36 GMT -5
Post by iceheart on Nov 24, 2005 12:17:36 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]Name:[/glow] Icepaw [glow=blue,2,300]Clan:[/glow] Thunderclan [glow=blue,2,300]Position:[/glow] Apprentice [glow=blue,2,300]Age:[/glow] 6 Moons [glow=blue,2,300]Gender:[/glow] She-cat [glow=blue,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] an Icey flame colored pelt [glow=blue,2,300]Picture:[/glow] [glow=blue,2,300]Personality:[/glow] A nice sweet personality with a confident feeling for others. [glow=blue,2,300]IC:[/glow] Icepaw was a new apprentice and she was on her way to the training hollow. Without a metor cuz she still for some reason didn't have a mentor and wanted one soo bad. I WANT A MENTOR! she yelled [glow=blue,2,300]Code:[/glow] AUTAUMN
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Icepaw
Nov 24, 2005 14:13:37 GMT -5
Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Nov 24, 2005 14:13:37 GMT -5
There's a few minor things I think you should fix. The code is spelled wrong and in the IC, there should be quotation marks when your cat is speaking.
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Icepaw
Dec 1, 2005 17:20:25 GMT -5
Post by icefang on Dec 1, 2005 17:20:25 GMT -5
Once you're accepted though, I'm your mentor... just pm me ((my username's Icefang)), and we'll get training started.
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