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Rattail
Nov 8, 2005 18:06:17 GMT -5
Post by kamera on Nov 8, 2005 18:06:17 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Name:[/glow] Rattail [glow=red,2,300]Clan:[/glow] Shadowclan [glow=red,2,300]Position:[/glow] Warrior [glow=red,2,300]Age:[/glow] 21 moons [glow=red,2,300]Gender:[/glow] Male [glow=red,2,300]Peltage:[/glow] A mangy orange pelt with brown and white stripes. [glow=red,2,300]Picture:[/glow] [glow=red,2,300]Personality:[/glow] He is like a rat, disgusting but a grand fighter he talks funny. [glow=red,2,300]IC:[/glow] “Sire will be pleased, yes he will” snickered Rattail as he came up to his leaders den. “Sire will” Rattail sat at the entrence of his leaders den and meowed, "Sire, I come in?" [glow=red,2,300]Code:[/glow] Autaumn
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Rattail
Nov 8, 2005 18:06:51 GMT -5
Post by kamera on Nov 8, 2005 18:06:51 GMT -5
Sorry I don't know if Truestar is a girl or boy.
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Rattail
Nov 8, 2005 18:56:56 GMT -5
Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Nov 8, 2005 18:56:56 GMT -5
HI! And welcome. Truestar is a tom. There's a couple thing you need to fix and then it'll be great. 1. Write more in the IC 2. It'd be best if you wrote the Peltage of your cat
Thanks!
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Rattail
Nov 8, 2005 21:39:23 GMT -5
Post by kamera on Nov 8, 2005 21:39:23 GMT -5
Hows that?
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Rattail
Nov 11, 2005 21:38:42 GMT -5
Post by rex. on Nov 11, 2005 21:38:42 GMT -5
yup thats good. nice descriotion! accepted
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Rattail
Nov 12, 2005 5:11:37 GMT -5
Post by kamera on Nov 12, 2005 5:11:37 GMT -5
ok me going to start posting now.
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